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Hmm, have you already written about Octavian's advantages to balance the power among the siblings? I still don't get it, since he's the weakest of the three.

Author, did Gerhard take Speranza, the Ark Mechanicus, for himself, since it contains an intact STC?

Hmm, I like it. I like how you show the existence of mages and their development of power. I just want to ask one thing. You're not planning on handing out the main character's system to just anyone, are you? Only to those who report directly to him, meaning exclusively to the villagers? I also want more chapters; the releases are taking a very long time (more chapters are needed; can you release at least 8 chapters a month instead of 4? Two chapters a week? I just really want to see Eric's skill development; we know nothing about how he trains himself, what's going on with his system; I've already forgotten it even exists. And of course, I want to know more about the village's development.

Author, I beg you, please tell me, will Gerhard find the Speranza - the Ark Mechanicus? He must have this ship for himself. The machine spirit of this ship is literally an AI, containing full STCs. Perhaps Gerhard can negotiate with the machine spirit, since he created two such machine spirits—one, Hans, so to speak, and another, whose name I forgot—a tank.

Author, will Targaryens will go to the Esos?

So, in the end, the named and most famous Astartes will be stronger than the Custodian?

Dont understand, how it is possible that Lincil has Str 165, vit 145, and Marneus has a lot more - str - 175, and vit - 185. And the same value in dex?

So, here's what I'm getting at. I'm currently observing a clear imbalance in personal power among the siblings. Hermione has magic, Lily has physical strength, and Octavian has nothing.

Am I correct in understanding that Octavian is the eldest son and helps Harry lead the empire? Lily is the middle sister; she leads the army and is also the physically strongest of the three siblings. Hermione is the youngest sister and the most magically gifted of her siblings. So, the eldest child and heir is the least magically gifted, the least physically gifted, and yet he will potentially lead the state if his father leaves. Essentially, Harry's heir has no power over the army for the most part because Lily commands the legions and doesn't have magic as powerful as Hermione's. He has absolutely no leverage to compete with his sisters. The administrative apparatus and all manner of spies aren't sufficient leverage to maintain a balance of power should his sisters begin to act against the Imperium's interests. For example, Lily is already showing some anti-Imperium tendencies. She promises Damon that her father won't harm him. So, here's what I'm getting at. I'm currently observing a clear imbalance in personal power among the siblings. Hermione has magic, Lily has physical strength, and Octavian has nothing.

I don't quite understand. A chapter is released once a week. But there's no plot development. Maybe you could change the approach? Three or four chapters of plot development, followed by one filler chapter. Otherwise, watching MC admire nature and fortresses is a bit strange and silly. It's as if he's never seen pictures of castles, or even actual castles, in Europe.