Alesand

It seems like the author wants to make the character a long-dead child of Cersei, which is very, very stupid. Because then there will be a lot of plot questions, which will have a bad effect, because the author is weak in explaining the reasons.

Ah, then it's clear, you like a more childish and frivolous thunder god. In fact, you like a more humane and tactful character, which is complete bullshit, which Taika Waititi came up with, he's a complete asshole. An Asgardian who has lived for thousands of years cannot have such a character, unless it's his mask or original archetype, like Loki.

And I don't understand why they couldn't just hire Syrio Forel. What happens next, Stark gets killed again and Thor has to do missions and errands? Shit, we've seen this in fanfics so many times. Fuck, listen to me a little. All your fanfics are rated 4 or lower. Don't tell me you write them for yourself, if you did, you wouldn't be posting them here.

The problem with your character development is that you don't take into account the influence of 1500 years of life. That's a lot, even I won't behave the same way after 10 years. And here's 1.5K!!! That has a huge influence, especially Thor's pride. He doesn't coddle children, he doesn't bow down to mortals. Yes, there is a task, a task to convince, and not to get caught up in the politics. You simply follow the plot further, and don't create history.

Just talki with her father and its all!

WHYYY????? JUST WHY?????????????

What's funny? I don't know a character who could destroy the entire universe, whereas Thor and Superman could

1500 years of life experience doesn't change you, you mean? Nonsense. He's not Thor, but he's definitely not a transmigrated human, a demigod has much more experience than a mortal soul. Let's say you introduce him to the tournament, but at least do it beautifully, not as an order from a mortal to a demigod, it looks ridiculous, and don't make it difficult for him in this sparring, because he killed a damn bear with one blow... No one is his rival

I really hope you don't put Thor in the tournament, I understand that Thor from the movies is always for any fun, but his pride is even greater. He looks down on people a little, it's understandable and he won't babysit children or perform for the amusement of the public. 1500 years of life experience changes people, and here you show as if everything is crushed.

There are enough characters in Bleach who will ignore this ability. The ability to tear space directly is present in many characters