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TeetoBanditto
TeetoBandittoLv61yr
2023-03-26 09:53

Nice fanfic. Very good actually. Especially considering how rare good OC fanfics that doesn't follow original plot and main cast, are. One thing I don't like is gacha scaling. Too much, too fast, too easy in my opinion.

ONE PIECE: Game Game No Mi

CYANOMN1VORE
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33 Chs

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CYANOMN1VORE
CYANOMN1VOREAuthor

A masterpiece. Better than any other book ever made, Harry Potter who? Percy Jackson what? If you read this, every other piece of writing will become garbage to you. Source: Trust me bro ;)

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Garland
GarlandLv4

The story is overallmid. The main issue is the structure of the story and jist how freaking broken and unbalanced the system is. First of all, each reading of the story feels like i am reading an entire paragraph. It could have been shortened enough or used either 1 or 2 sentences. The first few chapters was pure info dump. As a story, the system completely is broken and unbalanced. He does a few certain actions and boom, high grade sword and powerful devil fruit. Heck, chapter 1 and he already has jack sparrows compass which is one of the most op items. Since he knows one piece, the whole limitations of the compass won't work. It feels more like he is actually buying the rewards directly instead of being a gacha. Sure Gamer systems are meant to make the mc strong fast but this is just ridiculous, how many chapters in and he already has high class weapons and a large number of devil fruits. I can pretty much say that the next thing he could be recdiving is the rokushiki and haki, all after only a number of chapters in. The whole weaktostrong tag doesn't really fit in to this story. The structure could be fix but the system is overall broken.

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DreamsNeverDie
DreamsNeverDieLv15

PLEASE🙏🏽🙏🏽release more frequently!! This is fr the best One Piece FF I’ve seen so far.

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Reveal spoiler

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LifelessMan
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Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

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Tatterus
TatterusLv4

Honestly, it's a really good story, but leave some devil fruits for the rest of us.

1yr
Zero_619
Zero_619Lv5

Well just 11 chapters in but it got me hooked. It will be interesting to see who will be in the MC's crew as he would need some real good members to even hope for sailing the Grand line.

1yr
Kiiiddd
KiiidddLv14

Started out fine but lost interest really fast, didn't even get thou all the posted chapters

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Albanian_Gamer
Albanian_GamerLv4

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