Item: Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize
Rating: 3
Author: Avengtank

AvengtankLv51yr

2023-05-18 02:08

Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.

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