Item: Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize
Rating: 4.6
Author: Grapes098

Grapes098Lv131yr

2023-05-04 10:44

So far, a good story indeed, good quality writing and English, good development and pacing. Only problem I can think of is to explain the world background a bit, it kinda just throws you in and I was confused about the country and I still don’t know the value of the money yet. If a unknown currency is introduced it should be explained how much of it can buy of something most people would know the value of.

Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

RavenClaw471

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RavenClaw471Author

Thank you for your suggestion. I will try to provide more clarity to the world background.

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Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)

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