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2025-01-09 16:06

getting tired of this novel ...sorry author but this is stupid all his reasoning not destroying the high tower over and over again is stupid his life ,the lives of his love one's keep being in danger over and over again and he keep a passive approach towards it while he keeps dealing with bugs and cockroaches over and over again when the biggest cause of it all he just leaves them be im done over 500 chapters all he has to do is take control or deal/destroy the high tower and his problems will be lessens and he could focus on his tech but NO many sentimental reasons from his woman and he won't do it even when his woman die they somehow revive .magical realism my ass . this novel is like face slapping Chinese novel out there with magical BS that you won't understand you just have to ride along with such BS and logic especially MC's logic why he wont just take care of the biggest tumor the hightower where he can likely find most of his answer . sign here's the scenario for this novel if anyone wants to read . MC died and resurrected by someone or unknown idk MC finds out His former GF is alive/ resurrected MC went for Revenge on his killer MC build a techno city MC gains knowledge that's behind all of those shts that happened to him and his GF is the hightower MC almost lost his GF again because of high tower GF almost die because of satan MC went to revenge again MC gave his GF to japan to get treated MC find out that his GF is being a damsel again MC almost lost his GF again and surprised its the high tower behind it all again and suprise his decision leave them be for now MC went to war again in america with bugs and cockroaches and suprise behind it all is hightower again and your reader here is DONE wasted my time here sorry for a demoralizing comment i don't usually do this but its frustrating reading you MC and his logic you mask it a magical realism and him being overly cautious when in reality he can deal with them with ease given his technology and magic and cheat almost like a system

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RavenClaw471
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Thank you for your input. I'll strive to improve myself in my next work.

pillows
pillowsLv4

sorry just really frustrated about the looping scenarios of your novel . if you're open to criticism how about introduce how the cards system works seriously 500 chapters we don't know how it works ,how powerful is his summons and his power ,put some rankings or something like F-A rank S-SSS or something how powerful are those summons ,town level, city level ,small island level ,etc so we could know .because you're the only one who knows and MC of your story on how powerful is the cards he draws are . we don't know a single thing and didn't he have arch mage card how the hell is he still losing on magical knowledge or something isn't that the peak( on we dont know because not label or rankings to let us know ) don't make it overly complicated bro sometimes simple is best .best of luck in your next work bro ill come back to try again your novels 😊

RavenClaw471:Thank you for your input. I'll strive to improve myself in my next work.
RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

Yeah, you're right. I guess the card is way too niche for the blood here. I've come to realized this fact after about 200+ chapter in.

pillows:sorry just really frustrated about the looping scenarios of your novel . if you're open to criticism how about introduce how the cards system works seriously 500 chapters we don't know how it works ,how powerful is his summons and his power ,put some rankings or something like F-A rank S-SSS or something how powerful are those summons ,town level, city level ,small island level ,etc so we could know .because you're the only one who knows and MC of your story on how powerful is the cards he draws are . we don't know a single thing and didn't he have arch mage card how the hell is he still losing on magical knowledge or something isn't that the peak( on we dont know because not label or rankings to let us know ) don't make it overly complicated bro sometimes simple is best .best of luck in your next work bro ill come back to try again your novels 😊
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