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Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
Eldwood_KaumeheiwaLv151yr
2023-10-29 15:27

A worthwhile read. The story progresses rather well, the world building is slowly introduced thru the chapters, and tbr character development is solid for the main characters but leave something to desire for the minor ones at this point.

Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

RavenClaw471
4.3
640 Chs

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Project_reader
Project_readerLv14

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1yr

RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)

1yr
Hunter_Nim
Hunter_NimLv15

I am loving this book! I keep having flashbacks to playing MTG and trying to picture how the spells and effects would look. All in all, 10/10 would recomend to a friend.

1yr
Dao_Of_Sauce
Dao_Of_SauceLv14

I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading. If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken. Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them. To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.

1yr
TrueVoid45
TrueVoid45Lv14

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1yr
Avengtank
AvengtankLv5

Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.

1yr
nerdSupreme14
nerdSupreme14Lv15

The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.

1yr
Listlessthomas
ListlessthomasLv14

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10mth
Mishaela_Lucoji
Mishaela_LucojiLv14

All in all I'm trying to figure out why these always read like wish fulfillment works.The MC always winds up becoming an absolute nightmare and as far from thier original self as possible. All while failing to realise they're far worse than those they hated in the first place.Truly it would be nice if for once the old addage of When seeking revenge be sure to dig two graves would happen.

1yr
John_Rex_98
John_Rex_98Lv4

weird dialogue and surprise world background without explanation. the main charecter is stupid and naive.

1yr
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