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Grapes098
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2023-05-04 02:44

So far, a good story indeed, good quality writing and English, good development and pacing. Only problem I can think of is to explain the world background a bit, it kinda just throws you in and I was confused about the country and I still don’t know the value of the money yet. If a unknown currency is introduced it should be explained how much of it can buy of something most people would know the value of.

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RavenClaw471
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Thank you for your suggestion. I will try to provide more clarity to the world background.

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