Item: HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken
Rating: 5
Author: rorschach

rorschachLv141yr

2023-12-13 00:13

I am posting this review after reading 102 chapters, which is the latest chapter now.In all the above aspects, the story deserves a 5 star. The writing quality is so rigorous and stable that i can feel the pain the author has to go thru to weave this level of story.The story itself is sweet and mushy along with steady kingdom building. Not too much water bending prowess thrown around that messes with the story development. Filled with interaction between a loving husband and a sweet wife that are crown princess and a prince.Its a suggestion on my part, the author can ignore if he feels its not suitable. I think it would feel way more dramatic and enjoyable if there are snippets of povs from the current timeline (from 270 AC to later). I know its difficult since you have to take extreme care to match it with the fanfic history. But i think it would be pretty enjoyable, watching the butterfly effect in real time and how the famous characters act and revere the old queen and the hand of the king.

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