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alika_maisuradzeLv11yr
2023-05-27 19:07

The story has an interesting idea, but please explain to me why spoil it with stupid magic and Deus ex machina ??? The author, do you really not have a normal Fantasy or are you just writing trash stories?

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You seem to have missed where I said I am writing this for my own enjoyment and I wont be taking it seriously. Also dragons are magic itself given form and you are reading a story about dragons of your own doing...

alika_maisuradzeLv1

Yes, I think I missed the part where you said it was not serious. by stupid magic, I mean any magic that goes beyond the original world conceived by the author, i.e. Martin

Pretending_Author:You seem to have missed where I said I am writing this for my own enjoyment and I wont be taking it seriously. Also dragons are magic itself given form and you are reading a story about dragons of your own doing...
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Pretending_AuthorAuthor

Water bending is literally in the source material, the shimmer is just an infinite drug buff its honestly not that bad to be honest.

alika_maisuradze:Yes, I think I missed the part where you said it was not serious. by stupid magic, I mean any magic that goes beyond the original world conceived by the author, i.e. Martin
alika_maisuradzeLv1

The magic of the Roynar is indeed intriguing

Pretending_Author:Water bending is literally in the source material, the shimmer is just an infinite drug buff its honestly not that bad to be honest.
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