rorschach

what? hope he will come to america to play? the hell?

Okay. I have read some 40 chapters. And this story is not worth binging and wasting away 400 chapters worth of time. The story started off fine. It had so much potential. Going to original content, on occulmency and legillimency. Kudos, man. The story's focus was on the "FOCUS". The boy can do wandless magic and honestly the author has provided a valid reason. But Why the hell is suddenly spewing out powerful dark spells at a troll? When did he master it? Nada, not a mention. He created an equivalent of Marauder's map. The author just glossed over the preparation part. That mc learned this and learned that. Hogwarts gave permission because he is a student.. He learnt Kanji and furthak language for runic expression and got so good at it that he can actually create a really really complex artefact. But the components, the rune knowledge, the synchronisation part of the different rune languages, investigation hogwarts permission to get the details for the map - Nada, nyet, zilch. This is not a 'Show - not tell' kind of writing, author. This is a complete TELL... I mean he does wandless magic, that doesn't mean that equates to suddenly mastering 7 years of different knowledge and spells... And the classrooms - they are barely mentioned. only at the start and later there is nothing. the interactions are shit and there are hardly any. And whatever there is, it is very one dimensional. Like reading a report. Coming to the last part, the story got too event centric. The author tried to do some new things, good, kudos, more power to you man. But dang if it was bad. Like story is hopping from a canon event to another. Author is too focused on his own make of the story, that it seems it is all there is. It's not at all missmashed with other stuff in the story. Heck, the power level of mc just went haywire. Gosh, all i want to say is that the story started out strong and got me excited. But it went downhill fast. wouldn't want to waste too much time.

oh yes, please go to quidditch.. i have rarely read good fanfics that actually involves quidditch

make sure to save the resident vampire. don't let him die

Damn, that's a mic drop if i ever saw one... what confidence.. as walter white says "I AM THE ONE WHO KNOCKS"

this was my first guest of what mc's first line of defense would be. a sea of fog to induce illusion (that legillimens will get lost in it, or a layer of memories that they will think is the real mind)

oh she actually had the beaded bag? i thought it was specific to that one fanfic i had read before.

guilty as charged. I haven't watched all the movies either. Just 2 or 3. Let alone any books.

ugh.. what the fcuk is this system? too many dialogues.. might as well be another character altogether..

well shit