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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv141yr
2023-08-06 01:14

So the story of you like football is awful. It’s not football. It’s more like a fighting novel with football added as an afterthought. I mean you can atk other players and kill them… I went into this with the mindset from the description that it would be something like inazuma eleven. Where they have special shots, dribbles etc I though this would be so cool, however I was taken aback by how it’s essentialy who can kill the other team with a football. I think this is why I’m so turned off by the story, my exepectations are fcked and yeah. Some may like it but if you have the same thoughts as me going into this then you won’t like it. Good luck to the author but yeah peace out ✌🏼

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Yeah, that is my problem rn. Might sit on this for a bit until I'm ready for a weird football combat story.

1yr
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AncientGoddess
AncientGoddessLv3

If you want to read a novel of a similar vibe to inazuma check ´Nero football’ although for me it’s more like galactic football I don’t know if you the know the anime

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GREAT
GREATAuthor

Ok, it's been a few days since I started uploading this so I felt it's time to write a review. First, this is my 4th exclusive book on webnovel so I have some experience writing. Before writing the real review, just one tip, read the prologue! Lol, it's important. What to expect: 1. A captivating VR game and an entirely new and fantastical take to football. 2. Characters with personalities. 3. An MC motivated and driven to achieve his goal. 4. Exciting football scenes. The grammar quality is ok, story progression I think is balanced, and the story itself, it's coming right from the passion locked in my brain lol. Anyways, I hope you pick it up, you won't regret it, happy reading.

1yr

MizuKen
MizuKenLv15

I’m sorry author but I got tired of reading this, I was looking for a football novel which this is but the combat kind of destroyed it for me. It’s probably I good novel for people who like combat but this isn’t for me.

1yr
OnlyGoodStuff_1
OnlyGoodStuff_1Lv14

this novel is so good the characters the football games so perfectly written also on top of that this has a mixture of vr and football 1000 years into the fute I really recommend this novel if your a true football fan

1yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The story of a footballer who reincarnates in the future, in which humans coexist with aliens. After signing peace between the 5 species, including humanity, a company created a virtual reality game to celebrate peace. The protagonist, who is a former soccer player, uses virtual reality to play soccer, interact with other individuals and even do romance virtually. I don't see the point of reading a novel like that.

1yr
Ewoma_Peace
Ewoma_PeaceLv1

Great book, the novel idea is fresh and the execution is amazing so far. Definitely recommend

1yr
some_writer
some_writerLv4

Have you read the fanfic of Inazuma Eleven ?

1yr
David_Adetola
David_AdetolaLv4

I don’t usually leave reviews but I had to for this book this has to be one of the best sport novels I have read in a long long time everthing about it is just brilliant love it keep up the good work author love ur book

1yr
happyhappyhappy
happyhappyhappyLv1

love me a good sports novel. very detailed plays, and love the incorporation of the fighting. maybe add more football elements, but overall still good.

1yr
RadicalAM
RadicalAMLv13

This a great story normal I don’t like vr type stories but this captivated me. Good work author-san

1yr
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