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GREAT
GREATAuthor2yr
2023-03-09 06:32

Ok, it's been a few days since I started uploading this so I felt it's time to write a review. First, this is my 4th exclusive book on webnovel so I have some experience writing. Before writing the real review, just one tip, read the prologue! Lol, it's important. What to expect: 1. A captivating VR game and an entirely new and fantastical take to football. 2. Characters with personalities. 3. An MC motivated and driven to achieve his goal. 4. Exciting football scenes. The grammar quality is ok, story progression I think is balanced, and the story itself, it's coming right from the passion locked in my brain lol. Anyways, I hope you pick it up, you won't regret it, happy reading.

Legendary Avatar: Chronicles of Wahda

GREAT
4.6
261 Chs

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GREAT
GREATAuthor

Also lol, this is my WSA entry, I'm also ambitious and want to win lol. Adding the book to your library, writing reviews, voting with your stones, and even sending gifts are ways to help. I appreciate any support in advance

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Polygamy
PolygamyLv4

is this polygamy or monogamy ?

GREAT:Also lol, this is my WSA entry, I'm also ambitious and want to win lol. Adding the book to your library, writing reviews, voting with your stones, and even sending gifts are ways to help. I appreciate any support in advance
2yr
GREAT
GREATAuthor

Lol, I don't understand

Polygamy:is this polygamy or monogamy ?
2yr
Polygamy
PolygamyLv4

harem or no harem

GREAT:Lol, I don't understand
2yr
GREAT
GREATAuthor

no harem

Polygamy:harem or no harem
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RyuSenju
RyuSenjuLv13

so is their a female lead?

GREAT:no harem
2yr
GREAT
GREATAuthor

It'll prob develop as the novel progresses, I don't want to give spoilers

RyuSenju:so is their a female lead?
2yr
edgy
edgyLv14

bro pls update 😭

GREAT:It'll prob develop as the novel progresses, I don't want to give spoilers
2yr
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GREAT
GREATAuthor

Yeah, I will, sorry for the delay, I'll officially resume on the 15th, I hope for your continued patience

edgy:bro pls update 😭
2yr
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edgy
edgyLv14

ok will be waiting

GREAT:Yeah, I will, sorry for the delay, I'll officially resume on the 15th, I hope for your continued patience
2yr
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Lunpal
LunpalLv10

Since when is Messi Brazilian?

1yr
GREAT
GREATAuthor

Who said he was Brazilian?

Lunpal:Since when is Messi Brazilian?
1yr
dankoku
dankokuLv4

is this an inazuma eleven fanfic or inspired?

GREAT:Who said he was Brazilian?
1yr
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GREAT
GREATAuthor

I've not watched this, I got inspiration from Blue Lock and the world cup final though the idea has always been a passion of mine

dankoku:is this an inazuma eleven fanfic or inspired?
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Other Reviews
MizuKen
MizuKenLv15

I’m sorry author but I got tired of reading this, I was looking for a football novel which this is but the combat kind of destroyed it for me. It’s probably I good novel for people who like combat but this isn’t for me.

2yr

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

So the story of you like football is awful. It’s not football. It’s more like a fighting novel with football added as an afterthought. I mean you can atk other players and kill them… I went into this with the mindset from the description that it would be something like inazuma eleven. Where they have special shots, dribbles etc I though this would be so cool, however I was taken aback by how it’s essentialy who can kill the other team with a football. I think this is why I’m so turned off by the story, my exepectations are fcked and yeah. Some may like it but if you have the same thoughts as me going into this then you won’t like it. Good luck to the author but yeah peace out ✌🏼

1yr
OnlyGoodStuff_1
OnlyGoodStuff_1Lv14

this novel is so good the characters the football games so perfectly written also on top of that this has a mixture of vr and football 1000 years into the fute I really recommend this novel if your a true football fan

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The story of a footballer who reincarnates in the future, in which humans coexist with aliens. After signing peace between the 5 species, including humanity, a company created a virtual reality game to celebrate peace. The protagonist, who is a former soccer player, uses virtual reality to play soccer, interact with other individuals and even do romance virtually. I don't see the point of reading a novel like that.

1yr
Ewoma_Peace
Ewoma_PeaceLv1

Great book, the novel idea is fresh and the execution is amazing so far. Definitely recommend

2yr
some_writer
some_writerLv4

Have you read the fanfic of Inazuma Eleven ?

2yr
David_Adetola
David_AdetolaLv4

I don’t usually leave reviews but I had to for this book this has to be one of the best sport novels I have read in a long long time everthing about it is just brilliant love it keep up the good work author love ur book

1yr
happyhappyhappy
happyhappyhappyLv1

love me a good sports novel. very detailed plays, and love the incorporation of the fighting. maybe add more football elements, but overall still good.

1yr
RadicalAM
RadicalAMLv13

This a great story normal I don’t like vr type stories but this captivated me. Good work author-san

1yr
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