Just finished reading a few chapters. In terms of writing, I found it very easy to read and the flow was smooth. I didn't come across many grammatical errors which is great for a wider audience. The conversational style of storytelling was engaging and I didn't have to keep going back to understand what was happening. The plot was interesting and cleverly intertwined the protagonist's past and present life to create conflict, which gave the story great potential for development. I felt that the characters were played safe, but overall they were okay. I hope to see growth and development in them as the story progresses. The updating stability was consistent which is great for readers who want to keep up with the story. The world background was well laid out and clear, and I am excited to see how it develops as the story progresses. Overall, I enjoyed reading this and I plan on keeping it in my library.
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