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Shadow_monarch4322Lv31yr
2023-06-24 01:52

I swear it’s like every authour on here has some sort of pact where they need to make their mc a spinless coward when it come towards dealing with women I honestly dont get it. The story isn’t that bad well at least the starting chapter the whole tournement arc was meh. When you read something that says monster girl harem in the title and have an mc that proudly proclaim that he’s gonna make one in just the first couple sentences you have certain expectations and those have truly not been met. Idk maybe it gets better after chapter 40 (doubtful)

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Shadow_monarch4322Lv3

Though I will say the fight scenes weren’t bad the interactions tho…we didnt even see that guy again guren or whatever his name was and the chicks..honestly I wished that one chicks phonix would have died just for the sake of it and cause it would have been kinda funny and soooo justicefield

Shadow_monarch4322Lv3

Though I will say the fight scenes weren’t bad the interactions tho…we didnt even see that guy again guren or whatever his name was and the chicks..honestly I wished that one chicks phonix would have died just for the sake of it and cause it would have been kinda funny and soooo justicefield

SeraphWeddAuthor

Thanks for the review! And sorry, but did you somehow not understand the title? It's a "Monster Girl Harem" and not a plain "Girl Harem,” so normal human girls would have a lower priority compared to monster girls. Also, the ones he met at the tournament, Guren and the others, would show up again in a later chapter. Although it pains me, I can't just keep giving them screen time, as they're not the only characters here. By the way, in the latest chapter, he already had 4 tamed monster girls, 2 bonus tamed beasts, 3 half-monster girls, and thousands of transformed succubus girls under his employ.

Shadow_monarch4322Lv3

Nah i meant expectations character wise. The way I see it if you have enough balls to procliam to want a harem like just minutes after you reincarnation or whatever than you must obviously you know, have some girt (or something wring with you, not that I wouldnt have done the same…) after ember turned into a humanioned I would have taken a nice one week vaction to enjoy myself I have no clue why they needed to go out and hunt skeletons for crystals if they got a 2 million ticket reward and with his previous amount earned he should have close to 2 and half even after some spending. Though I guess he needed to train or whatever but it still could have waited a while dude almost just died I would think some would want to relax afterwards Cool that he got a succubus army I hope he actually enjoys himself and doesn’t just boss them around while being afraid to look at them, cause they’re too hot and are giving him the eyes

DaoistArboreLv14

Well, your comments made sense until you went off the mental deep end, after wishing death on a Phoenix, author probably should’ve just deleted the comments you posted and ignored you

Shadow_monarch4322:Though I will say the fight scenes weren’t bad the interactions tho…we didnt even see that guy again guren or whatever his name was and the chicks..honestly I wished that one chicks phonix would have died just for the sake of it and cause it would have been kinda funny and soooo justicefield
MegasusLv13

brother, im planning to write something of this kinda niche. what would you want from the main character

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