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BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv41yr
2023-03-26 02:38

The writing is genius each and every single word carries meaning and emotion The story itself seems like it's a story an actual story and not something like the usual I've been reincarnated or I have system its just a wonderful story . impeccable writing The mystery and the lore that surrounds the story will hook you. I wish you luck author.

Reincarnation of the Cross

Pendulum_
4.8
87 Chs

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Pendulum_
Pendulum_Author

Thank you so much for your thoughts on my book, I originally planned on dropping it because growth was slow but I was told that I was only on my third week of writing, that I should try and spread the word of my book. And so here we are. I appreciate your feedback and support!

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Pendulum_
Pendulum_Author

Excuse my shamelessness lol, but I believe this is a good book it just depends on how you view stories and hope to gain better understanding of a character. If you want a properly developing story with an acceptable system of knowledge then you're in the right place. The story has a good pacing as well as a strong MC which I'm sure you'll like, take your time and enjoy this journey with me...

1yr

Whispy_Aqua
Whispy_AquaLv1

The realism is what makes the novel good, the manner with which the MC describes his emotions and how he levels up with logic I was most impressed with Scentia -- the Oracle Engine it's a "unique" ability that you rarely come across. The novel itself looks like System and at the same time isn't so I understand the tags used.

1yr
LazyErosage
LazyErosageLv3

Dear author, I must say that your novel has caught my attention with its intriguing concept and plot. I encourage you to keep going with the direction you feel is right for the story, and trust in your instincts as a writer. Remember to focus on developing your characters and their motivations, as this will create a strong foundation for the plot to unfold. Additionally, exploring the themes and underlying messages of your story can add depth and resonance to the narrative. Overall, I wish you the best of luck with your novel and look forward to reading more of your work.

1yr
Selectials
SelectialsLv4

1) Quality of writing - 4. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3,1. 4) Character design - 2,7 5) background of the world - 3,4. 6) Overall rating - 3,7

1yr
f1n
f1nLv11

Reveal spoiler

1yr
MrBoness
MrBonessLv3

That's an AMAZING plot! I loved it, and despite a few punctuation and grammar issues, the story hooked me right from the start! I just think the paragraphs could be a little shorter, to make the reading a bit more dynamic. Despite that, chef's kiss!

1yr
Tripple1ZRO
Tripple1ZROLv15

I think that this is an interesting and novel novel. Mc splitting himself into two and then managing then brings freshness to the already used up reincarnation and other elements. I am excited to see where this is going to go and excited to learn how the double mc is going to utilize this to his advantage. Good Luck Author!

1yr
Dante_Hellscythe
Dante_HellscytheLv4

Really good world building, to the point it gives the story 4 points on it's own, characters are ok, but do feel a bit one-dimensional at times, however the story progression is the worst part, somehow completely filled with the background of the world to the point the actual story feels unimportant, it gets better later on but its still a problem. In resume: Story has a lot of potential especially in the world build, but while it did deliver a good story, it didn't live up to what that world needed.

1yr
MZAF
MZAFLv12

Good Story . I love the way the author tells the story . It just gives more emotion and perspective . The plot is also very unique . I was hook up and did not get bored reading it.

1yr
AYESHA_FAHIM
AYESHA_FAHIMLv1

I wholeheartedly endorse this book. Without a doubt, you ought to look it up! I'm only reading the few chapter of this book, so I can only judge it, but I have to commend Sypnosis for being the first chapter that actually grabbed my attention. I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic.

1yr
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