The realism is what makes the novel good, the manner with which the MC describes his emotions and how he levels up with logic I was most impressed with Scentia -- the Oracle Engine it's a "unique" ability that you rarely come across. The novel itself looks like System and at the same time isn't so I understand the tags used.

Dear author, I must say that your novel has caught my attention with its intriguing concept and plot. I encourage you to keep going with the direction you feel is right for the story, and trust in your instincts as a writer. Remember to focus on developing your characters and their motivations, as this will create a strong foundation for the plot to unfold. Additionally, exploring the themes and underlying messages of your story can add depth and resonance to the narrative. Overall, I wish you the best of luck with your novel and look forward to reading more of your work.

1) Quality of writing - 4. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3,1. 4) Character design - 2,7 5) background of the world - 3,4. 6) Overall rating - 3,7

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That's an AMAZING plot! I loved it, and despite a few punctuation and grammar issues, the story hooked me right from the start! I just think the paragraphs could be a little shorter, to make the reading a bit more dynamic. Despite that, chef's kiss!

I think that this is an interesting and novel novel. Mc splitting himself into two and then managing then brings freshness to the already used up reincarnation and other elements. I am excited to see where this is going to go and excited to learn how the double mc is going to utilize this to his advantage. Good Luck Author!

Really good world building, to the point it gives the story 4 points on it's own, characters are ok, but do feel a bit one-dimensional at times, however the story progression is the worst part, somehow completely filled with the background of the world to the point the actual story feels unimportant, it gets better later on but its still a problem. In resume: Story has a lot of potential especially in the world build, but while it did deliver a good story, it didn't live up to what that world needed.

Good Story . I love the way the author tells the story . It just gives more emotion and perspective . The plot is also very unique . I was hook up and did not get bored reading it.

I wholeheartedly endorse this book. Without a doubt, you ought to look it up! I'm only reading the few chapter of this book, so I can only judge it, but I have to commend Sypnosis for being the first chapter that actually grabbed my attention. I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic.