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MrBoness
MrBonessLv31yr
2023-03-04 01:59

That's an AMAZING plot! I loved it, and despite a few punctuation and grammar issues, the story hooked me right from the start! I just think the paragraphs could be a little shorter, to make the reading a bit more dynamic. Despite that, chef's kiss!

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Thanks, I'm doing my best lol it'll get better you can count on it.

MrBoness
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I'm sure it does get better Gonna keep reading and following, you have one more reader, bro o/

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