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Mohand_Mouloud
Mohand_MouloudLv11yr
2023-09-16 02:08

Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else... Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!! So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

xlntz
4.2
919 Chs

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AbyssmalReader
AbyssmalReaderLv2

Thanks for saving me time

9mth
Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

I read this novel too.. The novel did make people think that MC is OP, but he is not.. He is a coward and righteous type.. I understand the frustration.. MC behaviour is sure annoying.. His system is also useless.. The MC growth kinda slow too.. I lost my interest in continuing to read this novel, so I stopped reading it..

8mth
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Indescency
IndescencyLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Charizard6
Charizard6Lv14

This is one of the rarest times that i bought privilege for a novel and i have not regret it. I just want to read more of it. Yes, The power system of the mages is not mentioned like the level of each mage and there are some elements of Harry Potter in the beginning and some of the things are not mentioned. But still it's addicting.I Hope author releases a lot more chapters a day :⁠-⁠)

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Forlorn_Wendigo
Forlorn_WendigoLv15

There is a reason this is one of the most popular stories on WebNovel. It is really well written, and the world building is very well done. An intricate magical system that is meticulously well planned out creates a diverse yet immersive world that will suck you in every chapter and leave you bitter longing for more after you have caught up to the latest chapter. I highly recommend reading this story because you will not regret it.

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NoobLord114
NoobLord114Lv6

All types of Tropes and cliches used in this , useless system and forced plot , and plot holes numerous , usual faceslapping if you are a veteran reader don't waste ur time

1yr
tom123456
tom123456Lv3

I hate novels falling in quality over time, Dark (good) start with 4,9 out of 5 But then a miserable combination of a slice of life in the academy and dark begins, and the protagonist abruptly becomes dumber(a coward lets go of an enemy at the expense of a friend). And the development of the story is super long and just infuriates. 1 out of 5 the most offensive I really liked the initial setting

1yr
Daddy_strikes_
Daddy_strikes_Lv12

I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read., As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don't lose money. Don't wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?

1yr
C1over
C1overLv13

I think it's my first ever review in a while so here's my opinion on this novel: It's got a good pace of story telling and the magical realism is good enough, I'm surprised I liked it as much as I did. I'm on ch74 currently and I'm thoroughly enjoying it

1yr
SUPREME_OVERLORD_3770
SUPREME_OVERLORD_3770Lv3

IT'S GOOD IN THE BEGINNING BUT KIND OF DECLINES IN THE LATER CHAPTERS.

1yr
Mohand_Mouloud
Mohand_MouloudLv1

I can't understand mc's personality, she changes too often, sometimes he's very daring (when it's causing him problems) other times he's too loose, when he was a little more daring , it might have saved him some trouble... another point that I don't understand, that's why the mc doesn't progress at all without his system, he spent a year at the academy without advancing only a little in his magic cultivation, nor in the level of these spells, he relies completely on his system, suddenly I don't understand what he does all the time in which the other students progress, are their talents so weak? it has no compatibility with black magic? the author does not explain anything, he is just blocking it as long as he does not use his system, which is frustrating

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