This review is current up to chapter 200. I will also do my best to not spoil anything but only provide hints. I want to start with the negative. Thus far, the only problem I have with this story is the MC is a bit too lax. The MC joins a new school who do some…questionable things for recruitment. After something quite traumatic, he is essentially perfectly okay with being someone’s experiment. I don’t have a problem with how it played out as it played out well, but I wish the MC was more hesitant, questioning, and that more inner monologue was shown after he was recruited to the school to show more depth to how he was feeling and justify a bit more why he agreed to do some of the things he did. Now for the positive, I love how the world is being built. We are 200 chapters in and the setting for the world has been established but there is still a huge amount of mystery surrounding everything. The school the MC is attending also actually has some depth to it and doesnt feel just randomly thrown together. As for the MC himself, he isnt necessarily a pushover but he won’t seek out trouble either. As stated before, he is a bit too “go with the flow” but he does have a bit of decisive ruthlessness in him. The side characters have some personality to them but they haven’t been explored in extreme depth as of yet. Finally, for those wondering about romance, there’s nothing yet. There are a couple of potential partners but nothing concrete. One of my own pet peeves is I despise when romance is forced into a story through some unfathomable coincidense and it just magically works out. So far, there’s signs there are going to be romance but it doesn’t appear as if it’s just going to be thrown into the story randomly, which is a huge plus point in my book. Overall, I highly recommend it. It’s been a fun story so far.
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your complaint with how he behaves is well adressed. he is forced to go with the flow of the academy because of that mind manipulation shadow thing. he would probably be more resistant otherwise. mc isnt a pushover, he only has no choice. remember he even wanted to escape initially. he also only went along with this dark path because it was his only option, then he realized how he reacts to all the nasty stuff seems to have been altered. its all well adressed and fleshed out. the side cgaracters have allot of depth to them too, you can tell that the author created complex backstories for each one that hasnt been completely revealed, he just isnt force feeding you info dumps and delivering it the right way. too many authors do the info dump lazy writing ruitine, not letting readers slowly discover the details, make guesses, and read between the lines. i thought this author handled all that perfectly. he probably took professional writing classes as well, i can see the research and attention to detail in his writing.
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William_Claw:your complaint with how he behaves is well adressed. he is forced to go with the flow of the academy because of that mind manipulation shadow thing. he would probably be more resistant otherwise. mc isnt a pushover, he only has no choice. remember he even wanted to escape initially. he also only went along with this dark path because it was his only option, then he realized how he reacts to all the nasty stuff seems to have been altered. its all well adressed and fleshed out. the side cgaracters have allot of depth to them too, you can tell that the author created complex backstories for each one that hasnt been completely revealed, he just isnt force feeding you info dumps and delivering it the right way. too many authors do the info dump lazy writing ruitine, not letting readers slowly discover the details, make guesses, and read between the lines. i thought this author handled all that perfectly. he probably took professional writing classes as well, i can see the research and attention to detail in his writing.
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William_Claw:your complaint with how he behaves is well adressed. he is forced to go with the flow of the academy because of that mind manipulation shadow thing. he would probably be more resistant otherwise. mc isnt a pushover, he only has no choice. remember he even wanted to escape initially. he also only went along with this dark path because it was his only option, then he realized how he reacts to all the nasty stuff seems to have been altered. its all well adressed and fleshed out. the side cgaracters have allot of depth to them too, you can tell that the author created complex backstories for each one that hasnt been completely revealed, he just isnt force feeding you info dumps and delivering it the right way. too many authors do the info dump lazy writing ruitine, not letting readers slowly discover the details, make guesses, and read between the lines. i thought this author handled all that perfectly. he probably took professional writing classes as well, i can see the research and attention to detail in his writing.
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William_Claw:your complaint with how he behaves is well adressed. he is forced to go with the flow of the academy because of that mind manipulation shadow thing. he would probably be more resistant otherwise. mc isnt a pushover, he only has no choice. remember he even wanted to escape initially. he also only went along with this dark path because it was his only option, then he realized how he reacts to all the nasty stuff seems to have been altered. its all well adressed and fleshed out. the side cgaracters have allot of depth to them too, you can tell that the author created complex backstories for each one that hasnt been completely revealed, he just isnt force feeding you info dumps and delivering it the right way. too many authors do the info dump lazy writing ruitine, not letting readers slowly discover the details, make guesses, and read between the lines. i thought this author handled all that perfectly. he probably took professional writing classes as well, i can see the research and attention to detail in his writing.
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Eu já li um pouco só que fico frustrado porque o mc mesmo que só em pensamentos aceita tudo,pior ele aceita tudo calado,ele não quer vingança ou no mínimo revisar de forma igual quando ele tiver força
William_Claw:your complaint with how he behaves is well adressed. he is forced to go with the flow of the academy because of that mind manipulation shadow thing. he would probably be more resistant otherwise. mc isnt a pushover, he only has no choice. remember he even wanted to escape initially. he also only went along with this dark path because it was his only option, then he realized how he reacts to all the nasty stuff seems to have been altered. its all well adressed and fleshed out. the side cgaracters have allot of depth to them too, you can tell that the author created complex backstories for each one that hasnt been completely revealed, he just isnt force feeding you info dumps and delivering it the right way. too many authors do the info dump lazy writing ruitine, not letting readers slowly discover the details, make guesses, and read between the lines. i thought this author handled all that perfectly. he probably took professional writing classes as well, i can see the research and attention to detail in his writing.
