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Chestnutriceeee
ChestnutriceeeeAuthor1yr
2023-05-19 22:03

Review 10 from yours truly! Personally, I think this is one of my better works, but most won't like it. After being reincarnated, the main characters are cast out from the class and instead of looking for revenge by fighting nail and tooth, they try to live normally first and only take revenge when they know they won't be consumed by it. Dual protagonists who can't exactly function without each other, though the focus is on Claude, Elric remains the titular MC and is pretty much an enigma both in the book and out of it. The story is one of self-discovery laced with humor that I hope reflects for someone somewhere in every line. Since comedy is such a hit-and-miss genre and this is mainly comedy, I integrate a lot of styles to make something for everyone. The story arcs are very personal and the plot is very character-oriented, I hope to make people feel with this story. That's most of what I have to say! Feel free to share any opinions or treat this as a qna section! I hope you give the story a chance

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SugarApostle
SugarApostleLv13

Will this have romance?

Midnight45
Midnight45Lv3

Stop saying we won't like it , This is Gold🔥🔥👍👍👍👍

MarkoEnigma
MarkoEnigmaLv4

the comedy is not placed at right times and its contradictory that is really smart and calculative not to get some poits(its like he turns into a dumb mc like naruto or someone else), another point 2 years in an hard dungeon mc doesnt get a mana increase and is kinda unpowering in the fight unlike sidekick who gets strong as is imaginable

Chestnutriceeee
ChestnutriceeeeAuthor

your comedy quip aside which is subjective and many people still find very funny, the MC is someone with a high IQ and a very low EQ. he can do logic, he can't do emotions, that is his character and is definitely not for everyone. the dungeon quip is also very weird, I can tell you have not read the bits where the MC does show himself stronger than the sidekick, but even if he didn't, that doesnt change much. This is not a power fantasy but a character drama, and that sidekick is still a secondary MC. definitely not for everyone, but it does seem like you are expecting something that the story is not at all about

MarkoEnigma:the comedy is not placed at right times and its contradictory that is really smart and calculative not to get some poits(its like he turns into a dumb mc like naruto or someone else), another point 2 years in an hard dungeon mc doesnt get a mana increase and is kinda unpowering in the fight unlike sidekick who gets strong as is imaginable
MarkoEnigma
MarkoEnigmaLv4

the story is not for me, you are right it wasnt something i was expecting, sorry of i came out the wrong way i was just sharing my stand about the story still it was intresting but not my cup of tea, still props for making something. big up

Chestnutriceeee:your comedy quip aside which is subjective and many people still find very funny, the MC is someone with a high IQ and a very low EQ. he can do logic, he can't do emotions, that is his character and is definitely not for everyone. the dungeon quip is also very weird, I can tell you have not read the bits where the MC does show himself stronger than the sidekick, but even if he didn't, that doesnt change much. This is not a power fantasy but a character drama, and that sidekick is still a secondary MC. definitely not for everyone, but it does seem like you are expecting something that the story is not at all about
OOP_Group_11
OOP_Group_11Lv3

No!! We don't want that! The heck man

SugarApostle:Will this have romance?
AlexisCain
AlexisCainLv4

tthis NEEDS more chapters , please upload more chapters

Chestnutriceeee
ChestnutriceeeeAuthor

i will! very soon!

AlexisCain:tthis NEEDS more chapters , please upload more chapters
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ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

Reading status: Finished the first volume Writing Quality 5 ⭐ : Nothing to comment here Story Development 3 ⭐ : How the plot progress is decent but getting rather stale real quickly too. Author should introduce better hooks to keep the story more engaging. Some plot points feel forced like how mc and the hero get banished. As a person who liked to sleep for a prolonged time, what's the reason for him to sneak to the Library at all in the Middle of the night? the rationale of his actions is near non-existent except for him having chuuni syndrome but it's still not convincing as mc main trait is his sleepiness. Not only that, i suggested to add more details to your story like showing the surroundings, giving more vivid description to things like combat. Character Design 4 ⭐ :The characters introduced so far have good character building and they stay true to themselves but my main problem is with the mc itself. Look, Mc quirks and action seems too unsynchronized to me. look at him from before and after the banishment, we can chalk up his act of sneaking into the library at the middle of the night as his adverse reaction to the guys who summon them which also highlights his intelligence somewhat, then the snake village arc make me feel his iq degraded. After surviving from the misty forest arc, mc Should have grown more wiser. plus i call bs that after 2 years his mana is still at 3 points when he have the adaptability unique skill and also no way that a large source of water always existed that cause him to never use his create water magic. In short i feel mc is very unsynchronized Updating Stability 5 ⭐ : no comment here World Background 4 ⭐ (actually 3 ⭐) : The world building is not that clear for now. The power system in this novel was okay but lack utilization and refinement imo. I'll chuck it up to the story is only 50 chp and an inexperienced author hence a *pitty* 1 ⭐ extra was given Conclusion: A decent novel that you all could try to read. it have it's imperfections but each character stay true to their personalities. Worth looking forward to.

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