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2023-03-09 00:23

Nice start so far. Can‘t say to much after 26 chapters but this story is a good twist on the generic reincarnated and abandoned trope. I really like the characters. They make a good duo. The only complaint I would have is that the mc, or at least title guy, does not have that much dialog although it fits with his personality I sometimes ask myself who the story is really about. All in all a very good novel and I‘m looking forward to more. Keep up the great work author!

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Chestnutriceeee
ChestnutriceeeeAuthor

Thank you very much for the wonderful review! I am very glad to know you liked it and the characters. Also thank you for bringing that up, I definitely need to expound on the titular MC's character more than the second MC, I'll get to it right away! Thank you again!

Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

before I decide to read I need to know is this novel a harem (more than one wife )? if not , will there be romance with a single lead?

Chestnutriceeee:Thank you very much for the wonderful review! I am very glad to know you liked it and the characters. Also thank you for bringing that up, I definitely need to expound on the titular MC's character more than the second MC, I'll get to it right away! Thank you again!
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Chestnutriceeee
ChestnutriceeeeAuthor

No harem whatsoever. There'll be romance down the line but that's not the focus at all.

Ashborn1609:before I decide to read I need to know is this novel a harem (more than one wife )? if not , will there be romance with a single lead?
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

Good then

Chestnutriceeee:No harem whatsoever. There'll be romance down the line but that's not the focus at all.
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ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

Reading status: Finished the first volume Writing Quality 5 ⭐ : Nothing to comment here Story Development 3 ⭐ : How the plot progress is decent but getting rather stale real quickly too. Author should introduce better hooks to keep the story more engaging. Some plot points feel forced like how mc and the hero get banished. As a person who liked to sleep for a prolonged time, what's the reason for him to sneak to the Library at all in the Middle of the night? the rationale of his actions is near non-existent except for him having chuuni syndrome but it's still not convincing as mc main trait is his sleepiness. Not only that, i suggested to add more details to your story like showing the surroundings, giving more vivid description to things like combat. Character Design 4 ⭐ :The characters introduced so far have good character building and they stay true to themselves but my main problem is with the mc itself. Look, Mc quirks and action seems too unsynchronized to me. look at him from before and after the banishment, we can chalk up his act of sneaking into the library at the middle of the night as his adverse reaction to the guys who summon them which also highlights his intelligence somewhat, then the snake village arc make me feel his iq degraded. After surviving from the misty forest arc, mc Should have grown more wiser. plus i call bs that after 2 years his mana is still at 3 points when he have the adaptability unique skill and also no way that a large source of water always existed that cause him to never use his create water magic. In short i feel mc is very unsynchronized Updating Stability 5 ⭐ : no comment here World Background 4 ⭐ (actually 3 ⭐) : The world building is not that clear for now. The power system in this novel was okay but lack utilization and refinement imo. I'll chuck it up to the story is only 50 chp and an inexperienced author hence a *pitty* 1 ⭐ extra was given Conclusion: A decent novel that you all could try to read. it have it's imperfections but each character stay true to their personalities. Worth looking forward to.

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