No harem? Instant 5-stars!

Review 10 from yours truly! Personally, I think this is one of my better works, but most won't like it. After being reincarnated, the main characters are cast out from the class and instead of looking for revenge by fighting nail and tooth, they try to live normally first and only take revenge when they know they won't be consumed by it. Dual protagonists who can't exactly function without each other, though the focus is on Claude, Elric remains the titular MC and is pretty much an enigma both in the book and out of it. The story is one of self-discovery laced with humor that I hope reflects for someone somewhere in every line. Since comedy is such a hit-and-miss genre and this is mainly comedy, I integrate a lot of styles to make something for everyone. The story arcs are very personal and the plot is very character-oriented, I hope to make people feel with this story. That's most of what I have to say! Feel free to share any opinions or treat this as a qna section! I hope you give the story a chance

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

Nice start so far. Can‘t say to much after 26 chapters but this story is a good twist on the generic reincarnated and abandoned trope. I really like the characters. They make a good duo. The only complaint I would have is that the mc, or at least title guy, does not have that much dialog although it fits with his personality I sometimes ask myself who the story is really about. All in all a very good novel and I‘m looking forward to more. Keep up the great work author!

Good story so far........ But would have preferred if the MC was going solo or the duo was male-female........

A unique name and an intresting story, with the information in sypnosis and the few chaps I read, There is a huge potential in this novel if the pace and quality is matched. weldone author.

absolutely boring .......................

Reading status: Finished the first volume Writing Quality 5 ⭐ : Nothing to comment here Story Development 3 ⭐ : How the plot progress is decent but getting rather stale real quickly too. Author should introduce better hooks to keep the story more engaging. Some plot points feel forced like how mc and the hero get banished. As a person who liked to sleep for a prolonged time, what's the reason for him to sneak to the Library at all in the Middle of the night? the rationale of his actions is near non-existent except for him having chuuni syndrome but it's still not convincing as mc main trait is his sleepiness. Not only that, i suggested to add more details to your story like showing the surroundings, giving more vivid description to things like combat. Character Design 4 ⭐ :The characters introduced so far have good character building and they stay true to themselves but my main problem is with the mc itself. Look, Mc quirks and action seems too unsynchronized to me. look at him from before and after the banishment, we can chalk up his act of sneaking into the library at the middle of the night as his adverse reaction to the guys who summon them which also highlights his intelligence somewhat, then the snake village arc make me feel his iq degraded. After surviving from the misty forest arc, mc Should have grown more wiser. plus i call bs that after 2 years his mana is still at 3 points when he have the adaptability unique skill and also no way that a large source of water always existed that cause him to never use his create water magic. In short i feel mc is very unsynchronized Updating Stability 5 ⭐ : no comment here World Background 4 ⭐ (actually 3 ⭐) : The world building is not that clear for now. The power system in this novel was okay but lack utilization and refinement imo. I'll chuck it up to the story is only 50 chp and an inexperienced author hence a *pitty* 1 ⭐ extra was given Conclusion: A decent novel that you all could try to read. it have it's imperfections but each character stay true to their personalities. Worth looking forward to.

It's very interesting and it's funny. Good job 👍✊️. I think it's a very good start. I am in the chapter 8. The main character is lazy but i like it. And Claude is cool too. So i think it's important to support the autor with a comment. Honestly I like the mood of this story. 😄 i am french so sorry if my comment isn't write good.