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ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor2yr
2023-02-13 01:48

Giving myself a 5 star review and I hope you do too ಥ⁠‿⁠ಥ 🤣 -- that rhymed, so do it 🙎🏾[img=coins][img=fp]

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Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

is this a harem??

tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv5

tell me bro if you know

Lord_Hastur:is this a harem??
ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor

Might be when I do a poll on it

tony_stark_3000:tell me bro if you know
ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor

Depends on what u guys want frl

Lord_Hastur:is this a harem??
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

Noharem please

ShadowDeity:Depends on what u guys want frl
tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv5

do it just do it. also have a big harem bro it will be fun to see how it goes

ShadowDeity:Might be when I do a poll on it
Gomuningen
GomuningenLv14

Author first remove the ”do not read” chapter! It’s annoying AF!

ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor

I'll remove it soon trust,

Gomuningen:Author first remove the ”do not read” chapter! It’s annoying AF!
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

mc has no brain, mc is brain disabled. mc has no logic, there is no logic in the novel. novel is garbage. novel is like mtl novel. mc has no brain.

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

judging from the way you write, you are 10 years old.

ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor

doubt it, I seen worse writers 😂 but sure bro, seems like your mad at the success of my novel, u even spammed all the chapters with the same comment

timeawayfromstress:judging from the way you write, you are 10 years old.
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

Because of the authors who deleted the review comment. I wrote so many comments and how can you write an mtl novel? Writing a novel like an mtl novel = there is a problem with that.

ShadowDeity:doubt it, I seen worse writers 😂 but sure bro, seems like your mad at the success of my novel, u even spammed all the chapters with the same comment
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

i've seen worse writers too. they were writers who wrote mtl novels. you know what people think about mtl novels. and congrats you managed to write a garbage novel. first go read reverend insanity, then start writing novels or read other good novels. read mtl novels, Do not write novels.

ShadowDeity:doubt it, I seen worse writers 😂 but sure bro, seems like your mad at the success of my novel, u even spammed all the chapters with the same comment
ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor

bro said reverend insanity ☠️ are u dumb? that's LITTERALY a peak level novel, but ok, u expecting everyone to write at that level is absolute stupidity

timeawayfromstress:i've seen worse writers too. they were writers who wrote mtl novels. you know what people think about mtl novels. and congrats you managed to write a garbage novel. first go read reverend insanity, then start writing novels or read other good novels. read mtl novels, Do not write novels.
ShadowDeity
ShadowDeityAuthor

u use Google translate to text, no wonder u think every English author is bad, seems like hating to me

timeawayfromstress:Because of the authors who deleted the review comment. I wrote so many comments and how can you write an mtl novel? Writing a novel like an mtl novel = there is a problem with that.
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

I didn't say anything about English writers.how did you get such a thought ?i said about the authors who write mtl novels.there's something wrong with your brain.i said don't read mtl novels because your novel looks like mtl novels.if you read a good novel, like reverend insanity, at least you wouldn't write such a garbage novel.you have problems understanding.

ShadowDeity:bro said reverend insanity ☠️ are u dumb? that's LITTERALY a peak level novel, but ok, u expecting everyone to write at that level is absolute stupidity
Moskov81
Moskov81Lv4

lol

I_HATE_INCENT_
I_HATE_INCENT_Lv5

Harem in MCU is just meh..........I hope his pairing won't be just a regular human though

hizer0778
hizer0778Lv14

harem???

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PlagueMan
PlagueManLv4

I really want to like this book, like I really do. But its just brain dead. First of all, the gamer system. I have no problem with it I quite like it actually. So nothing wrong there, well its sentient and the author doesn't care about what that means or even tries to say anything about it, mc doesn't even think about it. The powers he gets are sorta unique, or well his class is. Well sorta but not really, semi cultivation type deal. The marvel cinematic timeline (which is what the author said the story was set in) is completely dragged through the mud. By this I mean that the author doesn't know or remember jack about it. The story is set in 2017, which means the ancient one should be dead but the mc contantly talks about wanting to meet her, asgard should be destroyed but from what I've seen in chapter names thats not the case. Shield should be disolved, which it isnt, the avengers should have fractured, didnt happen. Wakanda, the black panther or even vibranium should be known to the past avengers and the ultron crisis should have happend but it is written that way, atleast tony has no clue about any of that. Its a good story, in theory atleast but it feels like dribble. As if the author watched the movies once a couple years back and then though "oh well I know enough about the story from the couple fanfics I have read so I'll just throw something together". I like the writting sure but not only are there plot holes in relation to the universe it is set in, which could be fixed by saying its an au (which should have just been stated), the mc is stupid. Like seriously dumb, its a wonder how he hasn't killed himself due to his stupidity by tripping on a rock or something. He practises magic in the open, like outside next to a school, shoots it in the air. Straight up gives his information and name to S.H.I.E.L.D and doesn't think about it. I would be okay with this if there was no hydra but due to shield still being a thing I have no clue. if shield isnt disolved there should still be hydra and giving them your personal details is just dumb. Plus the writting is cringy, like seriously "call me the gamer" what were you thinking writting that. Like seriously were you high or something? Oh and some parts here and there feels like a cultivation novel, just the character interactions. I can't truly explain it in words, its just vibe it gives off. You know it when you read it Anyway, thats about it. Mediocre book with good potential that is just filled with comically stupid choices on the author and mcs parts.

Mr_mysterio
Mr_mysterioLv3
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