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It turns out it wasn’t the real Prototype virus, just a very cheap imitation. If it had been the real thing, it would’ve had potential that could surpass even the MC.Thanks for the chapter.

As a reader, I just gave my own criticism. Hopefully you improve yourself and don’t take it the wrong way.Thanks for the chapter.

Stop writing just a few words per line and then moving to the next line. People skim through novel chapters by scrolling down and glancing over them, not reading like that. The novel reeks so much of AI writing that it’s genuinely nauseating. It still feels empty and emotionless for the reasons I mentioned.Also your chapter word count is too low.

Osric has the potential to do far more than what Garrick’s former captain ever did. Are you suddenly going to turn the MC into a hero, author? This chapter feels way too AI-generated. Increase the word count — the chapters feel very empty and hollow.

If someone had the Prototype virus, they would become almost unstoppable. Think about it: you absorb so many different races across worlds and take everything they have — knowledge, experiences, abilities… In the Harry Potter world, kill and absorb a wizard, and now you possess everything they knew. Then go hunt magical creatures in that world and absorb them too. With their DNA, you gain every trait they possessed. And even creatures you don’t directly absorb still push your evolution further, because every new addition refines you by taking the best parts of every DNA source and evolving beyond them. The more things you absorb, the faster your growth rate increases exponentially. Imagine absorbing Itachi Uchiha — now you have his IQ, the traits that made him a genius, and all of his experiences. Then apply that concept to every race across countless worlds. Basically, the Prototype virus is insanely overpowered because the more different beings you absorb, the more your growth multiplier skyrockets. And if the user also absorbed other viruses like the T-Virus or the Dying Light virus, it would become an absurd evolutionary snowball — constantly mutating through dozens of viruses at once. And it’s not just about humans. With so many different races available, the user’s mind and intelligence would evolve in completely different directions too. So honestly, I’m curious how the author is going to handle future chapters. The Prototype virus feels so absurdly powerful that it almost seems guaranteed to get massively nerfed at some point or not . Thanks for the chapter.

The only person I’ve ever permanently dam*ged is your mother, and she used to swallow a lot. But I didn’t let her swallow you, and that’s why you turned out st*pid. I should’ve disciplined you earlier so a brai*less, bratty kid like you wouldn’t exist. The nickname your mother gave me was “dragon”—you can think about why 😂. It’s funny that you named yourself that just because you’re mad at me.

“I’d f*1ck that stupid head of yours. Have you even thought about why these comments exist? Of course the author can do whatever they want. I just wrote a comment — it’s not like I banned the novel from the site. Use that bra1nless head of yours and write the comment again.”

This novel feels like an MTL Chinese webnovel. The main character is pretending to be a good person and has turned into a typical MTL protagonist. It’s most likely an MTL novel anyway.

And that's it for me. Mc has lost his mind. The author ruined the novel in a single chapter.

Just cancel this novel. You don’t even know your own MC, and you don’t even understand what the MC wants. You can’t even decide whether you’re going to write an evil MC or not, yet you’re still asking whether you should add romance to the novel. Do you really think the MC would do that? And what’s with the update schedule anyway—seriously, just drop it and forget it.