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the story of a novel is like a comic, so is the average mc IQ [not in a mature thought process or in the state of a school child having fun] the potency is great but what is the point of being mentally like that. the background is just that and the details are not good or bad but the same. the development of the story like children playing in the monster park or mc not fully focused in achieving the goal and more dependent on the system 100%. the character is ok for me but the mc should be changed to be more mature. writing, yes i'm not good at english so put it aside. i realize that this novel is based on a comic because of the very lack of details and the characters are like children or rather they are having fun in a dangerous world and how easy it is for them to gain strength without perseverance and hard work or hardship. The conclusion is like a comic story where the average IQ is [slightly more stupid for telling phill that he's a schoolboy]gets strength without difficulty or hard work thanks to the system and living life in a dangerous universe like playing in the playground and many plot holes but just ignore it because mc doesn't care. This story is good for readers who like light-hearted

This was good starting out than it like a chinese person took control and started adding wuxia'ish development in there got stupid real fast.

It's an interesting start to the story, I just hope the author doesn't drop the fanfic itself. I consider this a crime, which can carry up to life imprisonment.

its not great but its readable, updates are great. characters are flat and plot armor is strong.

I really want to like this book, like I really do. But its just brain dead. First of all, the gamer system. I have no problem with it I quite like it actually. So nothing wrong there, well its sentient and the author doesn't care about what that means or even tries to say anything about it, mc doesn't even think about it. The powers he gets are sorta unique, or well his class is. Well sorta but not really, semi cultivation type deal. The marvel cinematic timeline (which is what the author said the story was set in) is completely dragged through the mud. By this I mean that the author doesn't know or remember jack about it. The story is set in 2017, which means the ancient one should be dead but the mc contantly talks about wanting to meet her, asgard should be destroyed but from what I've seen in chapter names thats not the case. Shield should be disolved, which it isnt, the avengers should have fractured, didnt happen. Wakanda, the black panther or even vibranium should be known to the past avengers and the ultron crisis should have happend but it is written that way, atleast tony has no clue about any of that. Its a good story, in theory atleast but it feels like dribble. As if the author watched the movies once a couple years back and then though "oh well I know enough about the story from the couple fanfics I have read so I'll just throw something together". I like the writting sure but not only are there plot holes in relation to the universe it is set in, which could be fixed by saying its an au (which should have just been stated), the mc is stupid. Like seriously dumb, its a wonder how he hasn't killed himself due to his stupidity by tripping on a rock or something. He practises magic in the open, like outside next to a school, shoots it in the air. Straight up gives his information and name to S.H.I.E.L.D and doesn't think about it. I would be okay with this if there was no hydra but due to shield still being a thing I have no clue. if shield isnt disolved there should still be hydra and giving them your personal details is just dumb. Plus the writting is cringy, like seriously "call me the gamer" what were you thinking writting that. Like seriously were you high or something? Oh and some parts here and there feels like a cultivation novel, just the character interactions. I can't truly explain it in words, its just vibe it gives off. You know it when you read it Anyway, thats about it. Mediocre book with good potential that is just filled with comically stupid choices on the author and mcs parts.

stupid chinese novel

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I won’t bookmark it from the category, but if I come across in the future I’ll read it ...