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Darius_ChromwellLv46mth
2024-06-30 08:37

The main thing that you should note about this novel is that the main character is an idiot, not only is he an idiot but he gets progressively dumber as the novel goes on. Now don’t get me wrong I like this novel quite a bit, I’ll always enjoy a good dungeon society/ skill stealing story but the main character is what one would call a battle junky with a bad habit of practically announcing that he has cheat like abilities to everyone and their grandmother. I’d give the world and overall story 5/5 But character design / development is a -3/5 for me.

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ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Yeah, even at chapter 480 it’s mostly the same

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GeniusIthink
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I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*. Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before. Points to ignore while reading: Mc personality Sidecharacters personality Power level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak. If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines. These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.

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