I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*. Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before. Points to ignore while reading: Mc personality Sidecharacters personality Power level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak. If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines. These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.
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LIKEI didn't edit the comment like that, but alr. Anyways this was like 2000 characters
I forgot the level system, which is also broken as bro levels fast, but some random sidecharacters can randomly skip like 200 levels.
Till chapter 200 he acts like a kid but after that changes can be seen in his character
