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MeMeek
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2024-08-24 09:37

I'm at chapter ~583 as of writing this review, and well, where to begin? If you're new to this novel, you've probably noticed a bunch of minor but frustrating grammatical gimmicks and character flaws that don't really make you excited to keep reading. This would be a mistake on your part. This begins as a truthfully rather unpolished gem, but the author really hits their stride at around ~100 or so chapters. It's honestly amazing. The main character overcomes his naivete very quickly and is constantly learning and growing in ways that make sense. The world building is slow, but spectacular and logically consistent. The power scaling and power systems don't feel eclectic, despite their variety. Genuinely, just a fantastic novel. And the best part? It's free! By chapter 150, I started feeling really guilty for being able to read it all, expecting the "Unlock chapter for __ coins" popup to show at any point. It never did. The author is meticulous in their consistency. It was a genuine joy to read and now that I'm caught up, I'm hankering for even more chapters. You're missing out if you don't read this, seriously.

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I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*. Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before. Points to ignore while reading: Mc personality Sidecharacters personality Power level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak. If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines. These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.

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