writing quality is a step above a lot of other novels on this app but it still can be improved, for example it is hard to tell weather his thoughts are voiced or spoken internally causing confusion occasionally. not bad. but can be improved the story takes a few common tropes and trys moderately successfully to mesh them together into something coherent. teenager scarring and murdering hundreds of hardened criminals and dieing to be tranmigrated into a game he used to play when he was younger. apparently avidly. the type of game seems reminicent of dating sims where different combinations of interations cause new outcomes in the endings. it also grabbed the trope of unremarkable side character/villan being the one reincarnated as. consequently the characters are 2 dimensional at the start of the story. what you get at first is probably what youll get later on as well. i recommend but the first few chapters are forced and a bit cringe at times.
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I appreciate your thoughtful feedback on my previous response. I am committed to continually improving my writing as we progress through the storyline. As this is my first novel, I understand that initially, I may have struggled to effectively convey the thoughts and ideas from my imagination to the readers. I acknowledge that the early chapters may not have captivated a wide audience, but I had specific reasons for presenting the story in that manner. One of these reasons pertains to the main character's personality and his intricate backstory, which I am currently deliberating whether to incorporate fully into this novel. Thank you sincerely for providing an honest review. I am optimistic that with further development, I can alter your perception and receive a more favorable rating from you in the near future. I encourage you to continue reading as the plot unfolds. -Love Satan03 ☺️❤️
