andrewscooby

I haven't read too far but from what I have read I would give the novel a 3/5. The descriptions are unique but somewhat exaggerated. The dialogue honestly disappointed me. With the level that the author was presenting through his other descriptions I was expecting more sophisticated dialogue but you are knew so I understand. Im exited for what this can become if the author develops through his experience!

Yo author you dead?

It's good but it's incredibly slow-paced. Also, I don't really like the characters. They just feel very bland. It might just be personal preference, though.

Just a tip to the author. If you lock the chapters super early, no one will pay because no one will be invested in the characters. It also makes people not want to support your work because you make it seem like the only reason you write is for money.

Pretty good grammar for an unknown book, but the mc is quite stupid. He says he wants world domination, but he enrolls in an academy? Personally, I stopped reading there. He also gives the mc a human and devil body which he can switch between whenever he wants. Idk kinda seems like plot armor.

The Writing quality is kinda shit. Most of the time, it's pretty hard to figure out whose pov it's in. There are also problems that are pretty obvious if you read the book. And this is personal preference but the side characters are kinda shit. Nice try though on your first book.

Commenting cause I know the rest will be good.

If anyone wants a visual representation, look up "Rimuru Rage | Rimuru Use ‘Megiddo’ | Rimuru Kills 5,000 humans in the blink" on youtube.

Tbh, I only read the first couple of chapters, but the writing quality and plot ruin it. He reincarnates and instantly realizes how to use his powers? Also, the writing quality is kinda ass, But I guess it's a web novel so there is not much to expect.

The writing quality sucks, tbh. Interesting story, but the author just doesn't have talent. [img=faceslap]