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LokeErBestLv142yr
2023-02-06 11:25

Brudda is literally black goo, has the most common name in fanfics, has a system and this is somehow a harem story. I’ll pass.

Marvel: I'm a Symbiote

Addyctive7
4.4
316 Chs

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Gabichu_YeahLv3

XD you don't read it and also you leave a negative review, are you stup1d? 😂😂😂😂😂😂

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ChaosKamiLv14

Cringe Bozo, nice critics...

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LokeErBestLv14

By the same logic why did you leave a negative comment on my review then? I read the first chapter, I didn’t like it so I made a review of it.

Gabichu_Yeah:XD you don't read it and also you leave a negative review, are you stup1d? 😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Gabichu_YeahLv3

I still think you are stupid for giving a review only reading 1 chapter, even I read at least 10 or 15 chapters minimum before giving a negative review

LokeErBest:By the same logic why did you leave a negative comment on my review then? I read the first chapter, I didn’t like it so I made a review of it.
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LokeErBestLv14

I won’t waste anymore of my time with a novel I don’t like just because you don’t think it’s appropriate to. Based of the first chapter which I disliked, I decided to leave a review of it. I’m not going to waste anymore of my time with this fanfic.

Gabichu_Yeah:I still think you are stupid for giving a review only reading 1 chapter, even I read at least 10 or 15 chapters minimum before giving a negative review
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ghustVLv5

Smart of you to not force yourself on something you didn't like and waste your time, maybe your review made others with similar tastes to you not waste their time too

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DaoOfCultureLv14

Why the one star tho? This isn't a review, you just said, "Oh, I don't like that cus I don't" and lowered a FFs rating for no reason

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LokeErBestLv14

It’s a one star review because that’s how I feel about it.

DaoOfCulture:Why the one star tho? This isn't a review, you just said, "Oh, I don't like that cus I don't" and lowered a FFs rating for no reason
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LokeErBestLv14

It wouldn’t be a one star rating if this was a enjoyable read, which it isnt.

LokeErBest:It’s a one star review because that’s how I feel about it.
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Aaron2001Lv1

basically. you looked at 1 chapter, you didn't like it, then say the reason you didn't like it is because of the summary? you didn't give an review, you didn't read the story.

LokeErBest:It wouldn’t be a one star rating if this was a enjoyable read, which it isnt.
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LokeErBestLv14

I don’t need to read the entire story to give a review, I read the first chapter and gave a review based on that. I wont finish the entire book just so I can leave a review that satisfies you.

Aaron2001:basically. you looked at 1 chapter, you didn't like it, then say the reason you didn't like it is because of the summary? you didn't give an review, you didn't read the story.
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JustHavinFunReadinLv12

Then don't leave a review at all, stupid! If you didn't like the first chapter, FIRST, but don't want to read more of the fic, then just don't leave a review at all!

LokeErBest:I don’t need to read the entire story to give a review, I read the first chapter and gave a review based on that. I wont finish the entire book just so I can leave a review that satisfies you.
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LokeErBestLv14

I’m not going to read the entire book just to leave a review, i read the first chapter, didnt like it and based a review by the first chapter. Reviews are here for a reason so why should I not leave a review?

JustHavinFunReadin:Then don't leave a review at all, stupid! If you didn't like the first chapter, FIRST, but don't want to read more of the fic, then just don't leave a review at all!
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JustHavinFunReadinLv12

Because you're not reviewing the book as a whole if you just read one chapter, you're basing your opinion of the whole, entire book on just one chapter. I don't think you, or anyone for that matter, should leave a review without reading at least five, preferably ten chapters of a book.

LokeErBest:I’m not going to read the entire book just to leave a review, i read the first chapter, didnt like it and based a review by the first chapter. Reviews are here for a reason so why should I not leave a review?
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LokeErBestLv14

of course im not reviewing the book as a whole, you can read right? i said in previous comments that my review is based of the first chapter. im not gonna commit anymore of my time on this book just to please you.

JustHavinFunReadin:Because you're not reviewing the book as a whole if you just read one chapter, you're basing your opinion of the whole, entire book on just one chapter. I don't think you, or anyone for that matter, should leave a review without reading at least five, preferably ten chapters of a book.
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LokeErBestLv14

I just said, that’s exactly what I did. I also said it in earlier comments that I will not read any more chapters of this book.

JustHavinFunReadin:Because you're not reviewing the book as a whole if you just read one chapter, you're basing your opinion of the whole, entire book on just one chapter. I don't think you, or anyone for that matter, should leave a review without reading at least five, preferably ten chapters of a book.
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JustHavinFunReadinLv12

I give up. I've never encountered this much concentrated stupidity and ignorance! So I now say with all my heart,

LokeErBest:I just said, that’s exactly what I did. I also said it in earlier comments that I will not read any more chapters of this book.
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YoungOldManLv14

JustHavinFunReadin:I give up. I've never encountered this much concentrated stupidity and ignorance! So I now say with all my heart,
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LokeErBestLv14

I know what you mean, but you obviously don’t understand what I’m trying to say. I know that it would be a way better review as a whole if I looked at more chapters before writing instead of just 1 chapter. I’m basing the review of the novel on the first chapter. The novel may get better after chapter 1, but I don’t care. I will not waste my time by checking it out.

JustHavinFunReadin:I give up. I've never encountered this much concentrated stupidity and ignorance! So I now say with all my heart,
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JustHavinFunReadinLv12

No, you obviously don't...

LokeErBest:I know what you mean, but you obviously don’t understand what I’m trying to say. I know that it would be a way better review as a whole if I looked at more chapters before writing instead of just 1 chapter. I’m basing the review of the novel on the first chapter. The novel may get better after chapter 1, but I don’t care. I will not waste my time by checking it out.
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Other Reviews
Gabichu_YeahLv3

The first 3 chapters were very interesting, I hope that the symbiote is developed to its maximum capacity, I remember that Venom was even able to create universes with his body. obviously I don't need the MC to create universes, as long as he's strong I'm satisfied :D

2yr
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SeuVovoLv1

The mc is extremely unpleasant in every way, he is extremely cruel and indifferent in addition to the fact that his victims are always men and they sexually abuse all the female characters presented, not to mention the fact that he had a girlfriend before his death and he doesn't even hesitate to go after other women The female characters are poorly written, the MC simply enters the female character's body, sexually abuses and feigns innocence and they easily accept their existence outside that all other characters are just word fillers Future development is clearly predictable from the opening chapters The world is also weird, he just sees a meltdown of reality the moment he arrives on the planet and there's no reaction about it either from the MC or the other characters.

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ArSolarisLv4

The description said it wouldn't be all smex. That's all it's been so far. 70% of it is just blatant pron. otherwise it's okay, but the world is undeveloped and barely described, the writing quality is mediocre at best, and the characters are shallow as a puddle in the desert. It's a cool premise, but poor execution.

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SiegfrizedLv6

symbiotic mc? hope it's like predatory in qq that was awesome, but based on your other story should be awesome, so here 5 star

2yr
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Mohamedk123Lv4

1/ the mc a rapist with no morals 2: the females are tra rate like they have no brains. 3: it a basic haram story which the mc get everything he wants no matter what

2yr
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MadDevilBRLv4

Story of a symbiote with a depraved human mind, going after every woman he can, I can't think of anything better hehehe.....................

2yr
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Kono_TimodaLv3

This is a popularity review. I loved his rent-a-girlfriend Fanfiction so I have high hopes for this one. ................................... I'll take it down once we have 15thousand words 😋

2yr
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_JuneDays_ozLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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ShamelessGengarLv1

Very interesting, well written, I like that the MC is a symbiote who needs a host and has a system. It's much more interesting for a symbiote to grow powerful than a human, especially when he has access to the hive mind and can split off pieces of himself.

2yr
17
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