Item: Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
Rating: 1.8
Author: ArSolaris

ArSolarisLv42yr

2023-02-15 09:01

The description said it wouldn't be all smex. That's all it's been so far. 70% of it is just blatant pron. otherwise it's okay, but the world is undeveloped and barely described, the writing quality is mediocre at best, and the characters are shallow as a puddle in the desert. It's a cool premise, but poor execution.

Marvel: I'm a Symbiote

Addyctive7

4.4

316 Chs

Liked by 71 people

Replies4

Addyctive7Author

You're too used to receiving a full summary of the entire world and plot right at the first chapter as a big infodump. If you think that it's possible to fully explore the characters and the world with 30k words(18 chapters) in a story with multiple different focuses then you're expecting way too much.

2yr

RagingVortexLv4

you know you can delete trash reviews like this right?

Addyctive7:You're too used to receiving a full summary of the entire world and plot right at the first chapter as a big infodump. If you think that it's possible to fully explore the characters and the world with 30k words(18 chapters) in a story with multiple different focuses then you're expecting way too much.

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1yr

Saint_NovaLv4

there is too much smex

8mth

DaoistV8nDCJLv1

Yeah but it's really short

Saint_Nova:there is too much smex

1mth

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