Item: Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.
Rating: 3.4

crinixLv131yr

2023-03-21 19:34

It's an alright story, almost no grammar mistakes and world building and lore is quite good. But the personal turn down for me that make it unbearable for me to continue reading this story is romance, it was too fast and unrealistic and corniest thing I've ever read. If you can bear the unrealistic romance then go ahead read it, it is good.

Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

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