It's not too far into the story to accurately review the world background and some other things yet, but it seems to be slowly being touched through what we have so far. I really like the premise of the story as well as the writing. There are no grammar mistakes and the punctuations are where they are supposed to be. The characters seem interesting so far and the way the interactions are written don't seem forced or seem awkward, so the author seems to have prior writing experience which is great. Doing great author keep up the work and I hope you continue the series!
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i think i had read this in the past... it just feel a bit different. is this a rewrite.
Royalpanda:Thanks for the review
Well, most of all checks out. But, the only thing that feels amiss (at least as of ch. 34) is the MC's feelings. He feels like a robot. No emotions, not caring for others, no sense of family. I know it's only his 3rd day, but he doesn't even show excitement or surprise. Well, at least pretend....
Royalpanda:Thanks for the review
I don’t understand what you mean when you say MC haa no emotions and is behaving like a robot. Okay let me just skip the other chapters where he keeps getting facinated by his new world and focus on a chapter close to where you have read - (30chap) From this chapter alone, Mc expresses a lot of emotions, just like coming to terms with his new life and accepting his new family. And in the current chapter is facinated with Fiona’s gift (won’t give any spoiler). So please, I don’t understand when you say MC is behaving like a robot, or showing any emotion.
professor_rizz:Well, most of all checks out. But, the only thing that feels amiss (at least as of ch. 34) is the MC's feelings. He feels like a robot. No emotions, not caring for others, no sense of family. I know it's only his 3rd day, but he doesn't even show excitement or surprise. Well, at least pretend....
*Fascinated. «*Not showing
Royalpanda:I don’t understand what you mean when you say MC haa no emotions and is behaving like a robot. Okay let me just skip the other chapters where he keeps getting facinated by his new world and focus on a chapter close to where you have read - (30chap) From this chapter alone, Mc expresses a lot of emotions, just like coming to terms with his new life and accepting his new family. And in the current chapter is facinated with Fiona’s gift (won’t give any spoiler). So please, I don’t understand when you say MC is behaving like a robot, or showing any emotion.
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Royalpanda:*Fascinated. «*Not showing
will mc becomes strong or just a normal person
Ntr?
Royalpanda:Thanks for the review
Please god no
PrideAndLust:Ntr?
You are a paid review alright.
does this contain NTR??if so please reply as this will decide if i will read it or not??
MILARCH:i think i had read this in the past... it just feel a bit different. is this a rewrite.
no
_The_Shady_:does this contain NTR??if so please reply as this will decide if i will read it or not??
Many thanks...👍👍
MILARCH:no
I didn't start reading yet but i can i love you author🥹 but i can't afford to ulocky chapter by coins so im gonna stuckup some FP key😅
Royalpanda:Thanks for the review
nice
Yo what is up with this novel
MC have system
well it's true that he lacks emotion when he talks with others. and his inner thoughts are in the lewd stuff only. Let's see what the story has in store , I hope he will not think of sxx only and be smart to sustain his family with his knowledge cuz it will be a waste if he doesn't exploit it.
Royalpanda:I don’t understand what you mean when you say MC haa no emotions and is behaving like a robot. Okay let me just skip the other chapters where he keeps getting facinated by his new world and focus on a chapter close to where you have read - (30chap) From this chapter alone, Mc expresses a lot of emotions, just like coming to terms with his new life and accepting his new family. And in the current chapter is facinated with Fiona’s gift (won’t give any spoiler). So please, I don’t understand when you say MC is behaving like a robot, or showing any emotion.
He grows, and you get to witness his transformation. Check out the novel and see for yourself!
Kaiser_Evil:well it's true that he lacks emotion when he talks with others. and his inner thoughts are in the lewd stuff only. Let's see what the story has in store , I hope he will not think of sxx only and be smart to sustain his family with his knowledge cuz it will be a waste if he doesn't exploit it.
