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Lucipherion2
Lucipherion2Lv210mth
2024-01-26 21:48

The plot is..... okay I guess? Honestly that's the best way I can describe it. Chapters are short and most of it is filled with nonsense and peanut gallery filler so that nothing ever really happens. The MC has 5 wives early, and every single one of them has input on every sentence the MC says or does. So a chapter usually just reads as: MC: let's do this Wife 1: yeah let's do it Wife 2: sure anything you want Wife 3: I always wanted to do that Wife 4: I can't wait Wife 5: I'll grab the snacks And that repeats in the chapter for literally every sentence or action. Run into an antagonist? Not only do the wives all talk, so do the bad guys, and so does everyone who sees it. I had to drop it because 10 chapters worth of content was spread to 100 chapters due to all the filler.

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Jordzfml_7
Jordzfml_7Lv3

thank you , i dropped the story "first demonic dragon" for the exact same issue with mc and his wives

Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429
Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429Lv4

doing gods's work

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