Don't laugh at me, readers! I am giving myself a full five-star review. Why? Because no one gives a review to this cultural book!
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LIKEhi, I want write criticism about this book dear athure, 1- mc has very point even if he has system, he can easily achieve his goal without effort,for example he has divine martial art book without effort you think it is divine book not grow on trees 2-story pass fast. other character easily make feel to mc. you can write about conquer woman as reader i want you write about his problems and effort him for resolve them. finally I want see more chapter 😉
The problems and challenges will come one by one to him as the story progresses, and I will also introduce some of the new characters also try to improve the interaction between characters, which will improve the chapters greatly.
Thank you for your kind advice.
Nice, then it's worth reading, as I hate endings, or ensinga before reaching the highest lifeform possible lol. I'm gonna give it a read tomorrow as it's to late in the night to start now
can you stop putting mom in front of Grace and Anna's names? I feel like at this point it doesn't matter anymore and just feels weird saying. just Grace and Anna would be fine and seems more intimate instead of saying mom Grace and it feels like there is a barrier there that separates them differently than the other lovers. Like he doesn't say sister Lily when he responds to her.
I do like the story so far, but the thing I kinda don't like about it is the fact that they talk way too properly. I mean even the hunters sound like they are old-century novels like "I have never been graced to see such beauty" It makes it hard to truly connect with the book with unrealistic characters