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Flaiver
FlaiverLv41yr
2023-01-23 06:24

The idea of ​​the novel is good, but I don't like MC at all. He lives a second life but everything behaves stupidly and short-sightedly. Instead of looking for a shelter (island, castle, prison, etc.) and going to it, or at least finding out the route and finding transport, he just sat at a friend's house and played games, how can this come to mind? And there are enough such moments, the most stupid thing that happened so far is in chapter 11. Instead of distracting the zombies (with fireworks, a grenade, a toy, etc.), he distracts them with himself and almost dies. I hope this changes in the next chapters.

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N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2

yack... then I won't even bother reading this ...

Coco2
Coco2Lv4

but the MC didn't know about the apocalypse until a few days before it begins, so even if he was rich he would have no reason to make himself a shelter or prepare for the apocalypse since he didn't know

Flaiver
FlaiverLv4

Are you sure you read the novel? In chapter 1, he will know that the Apocalypse will be in 3 days. And all he did was tell his parents and then sit at a friend's and play games. In 3 days you can fly to the island, not to mention the simplest preparation.

Coco2:but the MC didn't know about the apocalypse until a few days before it begins, so even if he was rich he would have no reason to make himself a shelter or prepare for the apocalypse since he didn't know
Reoyof_Reoyof_7145
Reoyof_Reoyof_7145Lv4

How stupid can you guys be? What he did was perfectly logical. Because this is not a transmigrated it’s a rebirth can you build a life family not only that but he only had three days and he managed to get a lot of things in case basically be prepared as best as he could go to an island a prison, or whatever, he only had three days. How was he supposed to get there and if it’s a present there is a lot of criminals in there what is he supposed to do fight them with a shotgun? Honestly ridiculous don’t comment if you don’t know what you’re doing or saying this is honestly ridiculous and annoying because I actually like the story if you ignore certain things like the cough cough you know I mean seriously, it’s barely 14 man at least make him older like to know me by 16 or 17 this honestly makes me curious like a boy is the age, you know I don’t wanna say it’s not just because you know but because it’s kind of makes me uncomfortable whenever I’m getting off topic that’s all thank you

BludKratz
BludKratzLv13

What chapter does the good stuff happen in? Asking for a friend by the way.

Reoyof_Reoyof_7145:How stupid can you guys be? What he did was perfectly logical. Because this is not a transmigrated it’s a rebirth can you build a life family not only that but he only had three days and he managed to get a lot of things in case basically be prepared as best as he could go to an island a prison, or whatever, he only had three days. How was he supposed to get there and if it’s a present there is a lot of criminals in there what is he supposed to do fight them with a shotgun? Honestly ridiculous don’t comment if you don’t know what you’re doing or saying this is honestly ridiculous and annoying because I actually like the story if you ignore certain things like the cough cough you know I mean seriously, it’s barely 14 man at least make him older like to know me by 16 or 17 this honestly makes me curious like a boy is the age, you know I don’t wanna say it’s not just because you know but because it’s kind of makes me uncomfortable whenever I’m getting off topic that’s all thank you
Reoyof_Reoyof_7145
Reoyof_Reoyof_7145Lv4

I’m not sure I think it’s the third or second chapter

BludKratz:What chapter does the good stuff happen in? Asking for a friend by the way.
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

oh almost does. Well op tag is fake thanks for saving me the trouble

God_of_dragons
God_of_dragonsLv4

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N0_Hope:yack... then I won't even bother reading this ...
Onxio
OnxioLv5

Welp atleast I read reviews before checking fics out, pretty much saved me the trouble

CP_Strats
CP_StratsLv12

It's surprising when a story has actual reviews on this app that aren't deleted by the author, that are honest and aren't instant 5 stars for mearly existing or having a "good" idea. Thanks I'll be skipping this one.

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