Author here. I gave my own fic 5 Stars because...yes! I've had the idea for this fic for years, but now I finally feel comfortable and confident enough to write it and share it with you. Of course, I may make a few mistakes here and there, but I hope you still enjoy my fanfic. Our MC will have a kind of OP system, but still, living in an apocalypse will not be so easy. Thanks for the support. I hope you enjoyed reading it!

The idea of ​​the novel is good, but I don't like MC at all. He lives a second life but everything behaves stupidly and short-sightedly. Instead of looking for a shelter (island, castle, prison, etc.) and going to it, or at least finding out the route and finding transport, he just sat at a friend's house and played games, how can this come to mind? And there are enough such moments, the most stupid thing that happened so far is in chapter 11. Instead of distracting the zombies (with fireworks, a grenade, a toy, etc.), he distracts them with himself and almost dies. I hope this changes in the next chapters.

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One of the most infuriating novels you will touch, zero realistic ideas. The mc is Perpetually 12. Dont worry hes not a mc hes just a small brain kid with the brain of a 30 year old that acts like a 3 year old. Dont worry mc has been shot but hes fine, dont worry mc doesn't trust no body. Except any person he meets till they shoot or bite him. Dont worry mc has no eq. Just dont read this, author other works are great. But this one has well garbage. He had an infinite space that keeps time still, he doesn't use it much. His system is money based, he has yet to gain any money in 3 months so he will lose the system eventually. The author has zero medical understanding nor wepon understanding. Like the mc gets a tourniquet left on his arm for 8 hrs. And he decides to use a dessert eagle as his main wepon at 12 years old... with 1 arm... It follows TWD storyline with zero changes. Time skips are non existence. So if you want to read about a 12 year old 30 year old mc with zero knowledge "but he can get it its just the system is busted not available yet" with plot armor that lets him get shot every time he turns around. He regrets things hes done countless times, "hes gotten over it but still regrets smh". 0/10 i tried to read to release out of sheer will but i couldn't do it. Whats really sad is its really well written .... like i spot zero grammar issues which is lovely. Just the premise is god awful.

This is one of the brain-dead mc´s that you will see on this story. You can check the chapter 1 but in my opinion, it´s trash and have a great day

Quality of writing (2 stars, not impossible to read, but the errors are very noticeable). Stability of updates (3 stars, it's okay, the last chapter isn't from long ago). Story Development (2 stars, I found it very shallow, like it was just trying to fulfill a preteen's fantasy). Character Design (1 star, practically all the secondary characters are there to highlight the MC, not the ones with thoughts of their own, they are more of a decorative cast). World Background (2 stars, practically all the background revolves in favor of the MC and his dramas in an absurd and illogical way). I can't say it's completely awful but it's not a fanfic I'd recommend. (Traductor)

Why shop told oc about apocalypse only two days before. Oc cares about others more than his family. Although others don't care about oc much more. Why oc is dumb about survival.

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Me gusta the walkin dead en general, mas sus fanfic. Creo que en este universo se desconocían el termino zombie. No me gusta mucho el desarrollo del fanfic en general no me agrada mucho el protagonista, siento que los eventos pasan muy rapido e ubiera preferido que comenzará con el apocalipsis. Donde se viera obligado a robar un banco en un mundo infectado de zombis en ves de que tenga dinero por la moneda virtual o que tenga que vender cosas que saquea por puntos de sistema para compar cosas. La experiencia de matar zombies sirva para comprar habilidades o algo similar.