Review after 1st part of 2nd game ended NOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time! The good: - Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic. - Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!! - 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role. - Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good: - Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective. - At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed. - With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters. One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.

I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing💯

For starters, I don't mean to offend the author or his effort in the story, this is just my criticism. The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality. The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?

I do not plan to insult or offend anyone, it is my opinion of the novel. The novel has potential, a good development of the world and a clear level of power developed. And there my good opinion remains, the characters feel stupid, especially the mc, to begin with he seems to doubt life at all times, he never thinks about things and does everything on "impulse", until now he has not done anything thinking , from the beginning to the current chapter, he has been told that his ex-girlfriend is alive, which is the main and only reason why he transmigrated, but until now he has not done anything to find out her whereabouts, consult with his system, goddess or not even investigate or try to find it, another example is that of the mc leaving his position as heir to the duke, there is no logic or real reasons behind that, the mc knows that they are going to remove him from his position, and for that reason he resigns a month before When he could try not to remove him, taking advantage of all the resources that the heir to Duke would have, and also ignoring his sister's clear affection for him. Another issue is the mc taking it all as a game after almost dying 2 times in a row and experiencing a death. I'll leave it there, but the more you advance, the more stupid the mc is doing.

why is mc still a wingman it is getting frustating to read

story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.

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MC spends most of his time obsessively building a harem for the protagonist. Its been almost a hundred chapters of this and looks like it might go a hundred more. Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.

It's good so far. But I really hope this won't be a typical cliche novel where a supposedly dangerous and psychopathic yandere obsessed with another person suddenly becomes an uwu girl for the MC and accepts any girl in his harem.