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Spities
SpitiesLv121yr
2023-02-14 17:36

This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character. The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.

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StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessLv11

The only thing I see, a food that isn't matching with ur tastebuds.

AbysalEzekiel
AbysalEzekielLv15

This may be your fancy, but with the pandering you are stuck eating soggy French fries. This is an average unoriginal novel that doesn’t really add anything nor appeal past its superficial nature. The author is hitting on tropes that have worked in the past ( solo leveling, systems, reincarnation, etc.) It is kinda a mess but well some people still like soggy French fries and hallmark channels. The redeemable quality of the mc is supposed to be his tenacity, but executed poorly as there is no risk of setbacks, failure, and plot. I don’t care for hypocritical mcs :/

StumblingtoSuccess:The only thing I see, a food that isn't matching with ur tastebuds.
DaoistOY9Gvc
DaoistOY9GvcLv1

Save me the time for reading this, thanks

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Auri_Kvothe
Auri_KvotheLv15

Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points. SPOILERS AHEAD *************************** Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about. Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said. Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough. Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed. World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end. OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.

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