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Review Detail of Spities in Systemless in a Parallel World

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Spities
SpitiesLv121yrSpities

This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character. The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.

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Systemless in a Parallel World

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StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessLv11StumblingtoSuccess

The only thing I see, a food that isn't matching with ur tastebuds.

AbysalEzekiel
AbysalEzekielLv15AbysalEzekiel

This may be your fancy, but with the pandering you are stuck eating soggy French fries. This is an average unoriginal novel that doesn’t really add anything nor appeal past its superficial nature. The author is hitting on tropes that have worked in the past ( solo leveling, systems, reincarnation, etc.) It is kinda a mess but well some people still like soggy French fries and hallmark channels. The redeemable quality of the mc is supposed to be his tenacity, but executed poorly as there is no risk of setbacks, failure, and plot. I don’t care for hypocritical mcs :/

StumblingtoSuccess:The only thing I see, a food that isn't matching with ur tastebuds.
DaoistOY9Gvc
DaoistOY9GvcLv1DaoistOY9Gvc

Save me the time for reading this, thanks