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Ana_musings
Ana_musingsLv101yr
2023-01-16 21:35

If the title doesn't intrigue you enough already, the author's unique spin on Grimoires definitely will. What are you waiting for? Just start reading and indulge yourself in this story!

Systemless in a Parallel World

HideousGrain
4.7
207 Chs

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Aida_Mual
Aida_MualLv2

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .

1yr

Spities
SpitiesLv12

This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character. The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.

1yr
wounded_warrior
wounded_warriorLv14

Really good start! Can't wait to read more about Zayn and his back story. So far so good! Knowing Hide this novel is going to be a really good one.

1yr
j_maharani
j_maharaniLv1

I love the story and the way you write it. Writing quality, updating stability, story development, character design, and world background are so good. Success for you ❤

1yr
Auri_Kvothe
Auri_KvotheLv15

Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points. SPOILERS AHEAD *************************** Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about. Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said. Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough. Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed. World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end. OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.

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m_P3rch
m_P3rchLv15

Really good novel. Quite intriguing, nice pacing and quite unexpected end. Thank you author!

1yr
Aaron_Koss_5306
Aaron_Koss_5306Lv15

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was engaging and captured my attention all the way from beginning till the end.Thank you.

1yr
Viduus
ViduusLv15

just like his other stories this one is nicely done as well. oddly though the more I read of this story the more I find self not really caring about the mc and the story itself. I am really interested in the other side, the people with the systems. is there any chance we could get a story from their side or maybe a new story. a story with systems with glyphs on people. idk this story is nicely done but for some reason does not hold my attention like your other stories have.

1yr
Jayden_orgin
Jayden_orginLv3

I’v read the authors other books, and with how good those were, I think I’ll be sticking around. I’m not sure if I’ll like it, but it’s worth a try

1yr
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