Item: Systemless in a Parallel World
Rating: 5
Author: Jayden_orgin

Jayden_orginLv32yr

2023-01-24 10:57

I’v read the authors other books, and with how good those were, I think I’ll be sticking around. I’m not sure if I’ll like it, but it’s worth a try

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