Don't make things more difficult than in the original story to compensate for the future knowledge of the protagonist, that always spoils everything, by the way you got too involved in the ghost story, it stopped being interesting and started to be annoying, and to top it all off Of all the problems, he cannot fully obtain the ghost's abilities, and his conversation with the old man ends up killing me, the story starts well but it is already filling up with cliches, and his conversation with the old man only serves to create some kind of a sense of urgency, how annoying, a pity if only he had achieved all the powers of the ghost he could continue but when he nerfed the powers that cost him so much to achieve, he tells me where this will go so bye. PS.: Brazil is a Latin country, Portuguese is a Latin language that, like Spanish, comes from Latin

thank you so much for a good supernatural fanfiction + Mc with a good system. please don't drop it off. complete this fanfiction

I don't always do reviews but when I do it's because I want more. This is the best supernatural fan-fic I've ever read, keep it up.

XDXDDDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD So far it's pretty interesting, I hope the refresh rate isn't low, and that the author doesn't abandon the book.... XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDDDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDDXDXDXDXXDXDXXDDXDXDXD

(not a criticism) It has a lot of potential I thought the premise was good besides I haven't seen many good supernatural fanfics, I thought the mc was good, just a little confusing but there's not much to judge about the mc since it has so few chapters. But I look forward to the next chapters

Author's blatant review for self-love is everything. ................................................................. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I just wanted a Supernatural fanfiction. Thank you.

It was good sadly it died too early…

If anyone finds more supernatural fan fics let me know from what iv seen there are only a few but they get dropped pretty quickly hopefully this one goes for a while its really good so far