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Dame_ningen1
Dame_ningen1Lv152yr
2022-12-30 12:15

This MC sucks. He has some cool abilities but the character sucks. Its pretty boring to read and way too trope heavy. The author even went with the dense protagonist cliche.

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mow
mowLv4

Thanks for the warning i guess. That really sucks

tarwesty
tarwestyLv6

nah, I think your opinion is just wrong.

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

give it a try when I started it i wasn't a big fan but it became better the more it when on it's better than most danmachi system fics

mow:Thanks for the warning i guess. That really sucks
mow
mowLv4

I don't enjoy reading dense protagonist so I'll avoid it.

Lordmoonlight:give it a try when I started it i wasn't a big fan but it became better the more it when on it's better than most danmachi system fics
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

he's not dense he actually knows when a girl like him he found out a good amount like him just his sis who played him making him think otherwise

mow:I don't enjoy reading dense protagonist so I'll avoid it.
Apollocus
ApollocusLv13

he isn't dense more like he understands that they may like him but if he starts a relationship he understands that will be a burden and a relationship isn't suitable currently because he is a vigilante.

mow:I don't enjoy reading dense protagonist so I'll avoid it.
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

that fact that he isn't changing the storyline should of been warning enough to stay away. sounds terrible.

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

After the drama filled mess, there is just fate BS. Annoying af to read the blatant gasm the author writes over magecraft and its lore

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

most danmachi fanfic is rubbish and the rest is boring. It's like saying you won second place in a competition, but only 3 people participated. 🤣

Lordmoonlight:give it a try when I started it i wasn't a big fan but it became better the more it when on it's better than most danmachi system fics
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

I get that but this one is actually good if you can get over the first couple chapters where athour just start learn how to write a fic won't say it's perfect but it's ok better than most I've seen so far

Bob_Uchiha_XD:most danmachi fanfic is rubbish and the rest is boring. It's like saying you won second place in a competition, but only 3 people participated. 🤣
RandomFanficFan
RandomFanficFanLv4

The man isn't dense past like ch 20 or smth, just doesn't want to end up like Zeus-

RandomFanficFan
RandomFanficFanLv4

Also, actually READ the story if your gonna hate on it.

sampson_ragbir
sampson_ragbirLv3

He grew out of the dense faze

Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Thanks

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