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please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv42yr
2023-02-05 05:08

this ff would have been good if not for Freya as a love interest. I don't get why people love Freya so much no matter how good she might be she is a sl ut with a body count more than millions. Sometimes even meeting your girlfriend's ex-boyfriends things get awkward but here you want to be a relationship with Freya who has slept with more than half of orario and almost all of the male gods. I also don't get her concept of love if your soul is pure then she loves you if not you're nothing and this doesn't depend on your personality but rather in your talent so I can guess from here that is a mindset of common gold diggers. Are you completely sure in her mind you're not just one of the millions of men she slept with just more talent??? Habits\Addiction don't die easily especially not for someone who is practicing it for millions of years and it won't miraculously change in a single day after meeting you.

Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

Feniurme
4.8
81 Chs

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Hunter_Monarch132
Hunter_Monarch132Lv1

are you one of my people?

2yr
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H75_N
H75_NLv4

+1

1yr
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Slandered_man
Slandered_manLv4

Such a wise word I can’t tolerate that th *ot Imagine dating a woman who slept with all gods and potentially hundred of thousand of male mortals

1yr
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DaoistatnnJf
DaoistatnnJfLv13

Is it confirmed that she'll be a love interest or are they just on friendly terms? been stacking chapters so haven't read in a long time.. would be pretty hard getting back into it if MC will be all lovey dovey with her.

1yr
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please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

I also haven't read in a while but MC was simping hard on her even before meeting her from what I remember so of course he would already be her dog by now

DaoistatnnJf:Is it confirmed that she'll be a love interest or are they just on friendly terms? been stacking chapters so haven't read in a long time.. would be pretty hard getting back into it if MC will be all lovey dovey with her.
1yr
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RandomFanficFan
RandomFanficFanLv4

You seriously don't realize? Freya had to take advantage of herself in order to survive in Genkai, otherwise she would be locked up somewhere else by some god who wanted her, so she had to take drastic measures.

1yr
2
please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

Have you ever read danmachi??? Freya's charm powers so OP especially on genkai that she can make any god male or female except hestia and bell her betch. Why would she need to be afraid of some god locking her up??And if you want to debate I have tons of reasons to prove that she is a thoet like how author told her sad story about how her familia was harassed by hera in the begining but she isn't the only goddess who after arriving on genkai had to struggle a bit during their initial years until her familia grows strong enough. ALSO YOU DON'T NEED TO SLEEP WITH ALL OF THE MALE GODS AND HALF OF ORARIO TO SURVIVE ALRIGHT!!!!!!!! But if being surrounded by thoets your whole life has changed your tastes I can't do much about it.

RandomFanficFan:You seriously don't realize? Freya had to take advantage of herself in order to survive in Genkai, otherwise she would be locked up somewhere else by some god who wanted her, so she had to take drastic measures.
1yr
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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

thanks save me for reading something awful 😖

1yr
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Demon_Of_Lust
Demon_Of_LustLv3

So MC IS FRIA'S DOG? LOL. THANK YOU MAN YOU SAVED ME

1yr
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Shadow_Excalibur
Shadow_ExcaliburLv12

So your complaining over one love interest, that’s honestly stupid

1yr
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Thanks, fellow Daoist. You have opened my eyes before I might have chosen death over enjoyment. You have my regards.

1yr
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AkiraVonSchneider
AkiraVonSchneiderLv4

A love interest that has the body count of half the people in orario

Shadow_Excalibur:So your complaining over one love interest, that’s honestly stupid
1yr
9
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

try reading the novel amd you'll understand what we mean

Shadow_Excalibur:So your complaining over one love interest, that’s honestly stupid
1yr
6
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

thanks for rebuking that guy man, i always feel like a vain is gonna pop whenever i see stupid answers and replies like those. its like the guy doesnt know that she can literally almost charm/brainwash everyone with just a glance

please_be_gentle_:Have you ever read danmachi??? Freya's charm powers so OP especially on genkai that she can make any god male or female except hestia and bell her betch. Why would she need to be afraid of some god locking her up??And if you want to debate I have tons of reasons to prove that she is a thoet like how author told her sad story about how her familia was harassed by hera in the begining but she isn't the only goddess who after arriving on genkai had to struggle a bit during their initial years until her familia grows strong enough. ALSO YOU DON'T NEED TO SLEEP WITH ALL OF THE MALE GODS AND HALF OF ORARIO TO SURVIVE ALRIGHT!!!!!!!! But if being surrounded by thoets your whole life has changed your tastes I can't do much about it.
1yr
10
Shadow_Excalibur
Shadow_ExcaliburLv12

I’ve read the novel and it’s not that bad

Ireallylikereading:try reading the novel amd you'll understand what we mean
9mth
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Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

i guess this is just a difference in taste, many people hate thots but there are also those who like them.

Shadow_Excalibur:I’ve read the novel and it’s not that bad
9mth
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The_Zeta
The_ZetaLv2

Im sorry did you know link discord for this fanfic novel can you give me the link please

2mth
Ayan_Rahman_5212
Ayan_Rahman_5212Lv1

And where the heck did you read she slept with half of orario and all male gods? Don't talk mythology talk in the context of danmachi. She most definitely has her fair bit of sex history as a beauty goddess but aren't you exaggerating bit too much?

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