Dame_ningen1

Your way of writing this and the stupid actions the mc takes is ass

What was the point in making him Rias brother if he didn’t want to interact with her.

The world could end if you die and you think going to the beach because you are bored is a good idea?

What happen to all that talk about only liking a woman who is waiting on her future husband? Now he is a hypocrite

Wasnt he just at mind zeor. How is he using so much magic. Also didnt he have magic potions on hand. That little plot device was weak and this plot hole is large

This was a lame as excuse to try and fet those two together. I didnt know tou were gonna go the chinese cultivation mc way with women. How convenient.

You gotta start using ‘ ‘ when he is in thought. Using the same quotation marks for speech and thought is confusing

I find it stupid this fuy’s armor was not bound to him in some way. I guess plot devices are plot devices.

Don’t care get to the good parts of the story. This has been boring as hell. Xmen is not peak..

Took you damn near a week to release this much of a chapter