Dame_ningen1

The story barely started and the POV has switched like 5 times already.. Shitty..

Should just say weapons mastery

This guy kissed a prostitute.. This writer a nasty mf 🤢

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Trashy scene

This mc is trash and I see no improvement in sight. Wash my hands of this

So much for an mc with a good head on his shoulders. He acts like a child

This guy acts like a 15 year old. So much for being 40

Stfu and drop it then or write better. Im particularly toxic today

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