The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)
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Oh well.. Fair enough but atleast the mc help celestine and other characters from (Kuroinu)
why help someone after they've been raped...?
Ok I may have worded that very wrongly, and I just now read it again after reading your comment. I meant why not help her so she doesn’t get raped or before she is and instead writing about her being raped and then helping afterwards. That was poor choice of wording on my part
im more concerned with your question bro.
that wasnt my question but the response to the same question. Someone said why save someone who's been raped so I questioned it with consern
oh yeah sorry bro i dont see that 🤣 my bad my bad
So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?
Check my second response, I explained I meant why write a story about after she was raped instead of just writing a story where she wasn’t raped yet or in the first place because mc saves her from that fate that was the whole intention I just worded that so wrongly and so badly it came out in a completely different direction
Read further down my guy
I really wish webnovel had more reasonable reviewers. I get that you dislike the story direction and the sensitive subject matter being handled. You'd prefer a story where the narrative allows the protagonist to intervene before anyone is "sullied." That is your preference and your right, abandon the story, leave a review about how distasteful you found that. But don't drop a 1 star on all aspects. Reviewers that just drop 1 star across the board on things they don't like and 5 across the board on anything that hits their strike zone make the entire rating system on webnovel and plenty of other sites a complete joke. I think webnovel needs to implement a system like rotten tomatoes where quality reviewers rating are shown alongside low quality and useless reviews like this. As it stands now, every story is a crapshoot and the reviews don't matter.
with author just can deleting review this was pretty valid 1 star. if you can just 5 star a story just because you like it and just saying more more. why are you mad at 1 star review like this? also rotten tomatoes was a trash web with many bot in it so its doesnt even matter
I dislike both equally
