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Merlin58
Merlin58Lv21yr
2023-05-14 10:11

The author deleted all reviews so I won't write a long review.There is r*pe in the story...........................................................................................................................

Multiversal: The Shop

Charlottes
3.9
121 Chs

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Kururing
KururingLv4

Which chapter?

1yr
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MikomiMirai
MikomiMiraiLv4

huh the author really did delete some reviews, didn't see any reviews I previously liked

1yr
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MikomiMirai
MikomiMiraiLv4

probably meant the kuroino arc

Kururing:Which chapter?
1yr
8
simpp
simppLv1

does any of mc's woment got rped?

1yr
2
Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

yes,one of the potential future love interests

simpp:does any of mc's woment got rped?
1yr
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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped

Merlin58:yes,one of the potential future love interests
1yr
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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

*no love interest got R

MorningWood_Dao:which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped
1yr
1
Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

celeste ra*ed

MorningWood_Dao:which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped
1yr
2
Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

chapter 50

MorningWood_Dao:which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped
1yr
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Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

chapter 50

Kururing:Which chapter?
1yr
1
FandomExplorer_2nd
FandomExplorer_2ndLv4

Bro.. Celestine seriously celestine.. Its not the mc fault that he didnt saved celestine on time because the mc system only work when a certain individual walks into his store he cant visit other people/characters world without the person going into his store yet (And your thinking why didnt the author just write it before Celestine and the other got rap*d.... i didnt know and that is for a fact but one thing i know for sure that the mc help celestine destroy the Se* empire) .. I mean bruhhh ... cant you just appriciate that you cant make a good story without something bad happening in it first .w.

Merlin58:chapter 50
1yr
25
Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

Dude...I didn't like the rap* in general and the way he went to the h*ntai world.That's why I give a low review.

FandomExplorer_2nd:Bro.. Celestine seriously celestine.. Its not the mc fault that he didnt saved celestine on time because the mc system only work when a certain individual walks into his store he cant visit other people/characters world without the person going into his store yet (And your thinking why didnt the author just write it before Celestine and the other got rap*d.... i didnt know and that is for a fact but one thing i know for sure that the mc help celestine destroy the Se* empire) .. I mean bruhhh ... cant you just appriciate that you cant make a good story without something bad happening in it first .w.
1yr
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FandomExplorer_2nd
FandomExplorer_2ndLv4

i mean.. thats true anyone in the world doesnt like rap* .w.

Merlin58:Dude...I didn't like the rap* in general and the way he went to the h*ntai world.That's why I give a low review.
1yr
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Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

I think the problem was that there is a big possibility of the author to make it better or going to the cliche way but He did his own and made it worse since he could have saved it and I think an OC would fit in this type of settings since no wants to remember that h**tai and relive through that horrible scenes again. 💀💀💀💀

FandomExplorer_2nd:Bro.. Celestine seriously celestine.. Its not the mc fault that he didnt saved celestine on time because the mc system only work when a certain individual walks into his store he cant visit other people/characters world without the person going into his store yet (And your thinking why didnt the author just write it before Celestine and the other got rap*d.... i didnt know and that is for a fact but one thing i know for sure that the mc help celestine destroy the Se* empire) .. I mean bruhhh ... cant you just appriciate that you cant make a good story without something bad happening in it first .w.
1yr
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Skarlet_Malthael
Skarlet_MalthaelLv14

Thank you. You saved me

1yr
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PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

11mth
AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

me salvaste de leer esto, ya de por si la mentalidad del mc me molesta ( no soy un lol....c..n a pesar de que es un puto niño, no se de que va ese comentario ni que fuera, no se a tener se.o con luvia solo porque tienen una cita o se hagan novios absoluta basura)

3mth
Other Reviews
Charlottes
CharlottesAuthor

I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.

1yr

ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)

1yr
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

I really love all your works Charlotte sensai but at lesst finish them first, then start a new one, u will definitely or most likely will Lose interest in the previous ones like that.

1yr
LuminousValentine
LuminousValentineLv11

where is the 1 star review I thought before this fanfic rating was 3.5...................................................................................................................

1yr
Adrian_Nyel
Adrian_NyelLv4

I really like your stories Charlotte and this story also has promise but, you should really focus more on your stories considering all the stories that you left hanging or you just forgotten.

1yr
EarthlyNatureLover
EarthlyNatureLoverLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv10

Parece que el autor borró todas las calificaciones bajas, El MC tiene una relación con personajes de H de violaciones . 🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
Ased
AsedLv11

Well, I'm really sorry about your dad, but that doesn't change my opinion... Fanfic. All the action in the store is the same (when a new customer shows up). Also, I don't remember exactly because it's been a long time since I read it, but I definitely remember the problem with the MC and his Chinese stereotype persona. Well, the rating should have been 3.5-3.7, but you just deleted the reviews. Disappointment.

1yr
iffats
iffatsLv10

Pretty bad OC and Force interactions, and imagine shipping Lorelei and Shirou Emiya being Lorelei his sister? Simply disgusting as it's obvious it'll be quite force and I won't even bother seeing it through.

1yr
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