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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv142yr
2022-12-25 00:55

A really good story about a robot named Airon. I've wanted to read another walking dead fanfic for a while since the last one was dropped. Nice origin story, a well developing story that isn't too slow. almost a sense of kingdom building in his haste to prepare for the fall out which I like. The two problems I have are the MC is just a smart robot. Literally zero emotions, the author goes out of his way to point this awful aspect out over and over. Idk who would want to write about someone like this, who's only redeeming quality is he is smart. he does feel anxiety but thats manufactured from his past lives we have no comprehension of. His personality may be tributed to how his past lives went but that still doesn't justify why someone would want to read about him, so boring 😴, must make writing easier i guess tho. but at this point, he probably should of went to the afterlife since any personality has been sapped from him, he must of gone thru a lot. Second issue is his whole life and this plot seems to revolve around just surviving?.... well then what? whats next for a guy who's never happy or sad? Is there more to it or will he just be murdering, scheming, and building over and over again? lol im hoping some semblance of life returns to this man-robot because everything else about this story is topnotch.

TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World

SrCuervo
4.7
593 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

take my review with a grain of salt. there was only 14 chapters when I wrote it. There may be signs of life in the MC in the coming chapters. ill revise my review if so.

2yr
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trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Any updates?

DetachedDreamer:take my review with a grain of salt. there was only 14 chapters when I wrote it. There may be signs of life in the MC in the coming chapters. ill revise my review if so.
2yr
1
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

the book is definitely worth it to read. the character progresses much better within the first 30 to 40 chapters and its a pretty smooth transition since it isn't forced. the progress is slow but natural, which I prefer.

trudny1:Any updates?
2yr
2
trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Okay, thank you

DetachedDreamer:the book is definitely worth it to read. the character progresses much better within the first 30 to 40 chapters and its a pretty smooth transition since it isn't forced. the progress is slow but natural, which I prefer.
2yr
1
Fito
FitoLv5

well you're partly right, the mc still looks like a robot.

2yr
4
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

lol I can't deny he needs more development. a bit too single minded and lacking in some areas to really give the MC the complexity id like to see. im trying to be optimistic since I appreciate the rest of the story and the kingdom building aspect since its rare to see a decent one on WN fanfics.

Fito:well you're partly right, the mc still looks like a robot.
2yr
4
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SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthor

Hello everyone. First of all thank you all for reading this novel, if you like the Twd universe this will be your home. I can be sure that as the story progresses, I will try to do my best for everyone to enjoy it. English is not my first language, so it would help me to receive advice. If this story is well received, I will try to write until the end as in my previous novel. Don't forget to support me on my P_treon: SrCuervo

2yr

Newnoob
NewnoobLv4

*sigh* I know sooner or later this will be dropped. It's just how it is, there are tonnes of TWD fic's but they all get dropped down the line. So this time, even though the expectations are high, I'm still reluctant to believe that it will continue for a long time. So please prove me wrong and write the best walking dead fic in webnovel history.

2yr
Kirito_Gaming_9280
Kirito_Gaming_9280Lv3

Lot of expectations for this fanfic because there are not many TWD fanfics

2yr
WoahBuddy
WoahBuddyLv1

I'm disappointed, but the author does an excellent job in terms of writing. I only read chapters one through eight. What I like about this story are the background and world-building. The author does a great job of giving us an image of the environment. I also like the storytelling and flow of the story. But it can be rigid and forceful. What I dislike most is the dialogue. It would have been better if the story had a Southern writing style. It's difficult for foreigners to understand, but it's what I wanted to see. Unfortunately, this story has an Asian resemblance, almost like an MTL. It would have been better to add strategic locations, like Wal-Mart, back when you could buy guns in the good old days. I would have liked to see more realism involved and fact-checking. Lastly, I didn't enjoy the repetitiveness of certain words and expressions. Expanding your vocabulary and finding other ways to express the MC would help. Overall, it's a decent 3.5 for me.

2yr
Marcia_05
Marcia_05Lv12

the way the story is written gives a lot to be desired, it's what I see to improve, For the rest, it seems to me that the story is progressing well so far with an acceptable update speed

2yr
streiz
streizLv14

I love this story. I actually like the MC, he is not stupid with just mindlessly saving others. He use his knowledge to the future wisely. And what I also love about this is the update stability. I wish the author wouldn't just drop this like other fan fiction stories.

2yr
Fito
FitoLv5

An interesting story, but normally very few The Walking Dead fic are finished, there is still no romance, nor any interest from the mc. It would be better if the mc had more emotions, sometimes he seems like some kind of terminator that wants to save humanity.

2yr
RetMod
RetModLv4

Must read for every TWD fan and Zombie fans MC is stronger then normal humans and I like that and he also gets **** done

1yr
Quidanstealsnovels
QuidanstealsnovelsLv10

Its never a good sign when the literal first word of the novel that being the chapter one name is spelt wrong. Gramma is horrible, the flow of reading so messed up. Keep using the characters full name for some reason. Its not really readable. Also the world is described like a cultivation novel, bunch of unneeded exaggerated describing words. Again Its barely readable which makes the entire story to me pointless.

2yr
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