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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv142yr
2022-12-25 00:55

A really good story about a robot named Airon. I've wanted to read another walking dead fanfic for a while since the last one was dropped. Nice origin story, a well developing story that isn't too slow. almost a sense of kingdom building in his haste to prepare for the fall out which I like. The two problems I have are the MC is just a smart robot. Literally zero emotions, the author goes out of his way to point this awful aspect out over and over. Idk who would want to write about someone like this, who's only redeeming quality is he is smart. he does feel anxiety but thats manufactured from his past lives we have no comprehension of. His personality may be tributed to how his past lives went but that still doesn't justify why someone would want to read about him, so boring 😴, must make writing easier i guess tho. but at this point, he probably should of went to the afterlife since any personality has been sapped from him, he must of gone thru a lot. Second issue is his whole life and this plot seems to revolve around just surviving?.... well then what? whats next for a guy who's never happy or sad? Is there more to it or will he just be murdering, scheming, and building over and over again? lol im hoping some semblance of life returns to this man-robot because everything else about this story is topnotch.

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

take my review with a grain of salt. there was only 14 chapters when I wrote it. There may be signs of life in the MC in the coming chapters. ill revise my review if so.

trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Any updates?

DetachedDreamer:take my review with a grain of salt. there was only 14 chapters when I wrote it. There may be signs of life in the MC in the coming chapters. ill revise my review if so.
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

the book is definitely worth it to read. the character progresses much better within the first 30 to 40 chapters and its a pretty smooth transition since it isn't forced. the progress is slow but natural, which I prefer.

trudny1:Any updates?
trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Okay, thank you

DetachedDreamer:the book is definitely worth it to read. the character progresses much better within the first 30 to 40 chapters and its a pretty smooth transition since it isn't forced. the progress is slow but natural, which I prefer.
Fito
FitoLv5

well you're partly right, the mc still looks like a robot.

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

lol I can't deny he needs more development. a bit too single minded and lacking in some areas to really give the MC the complexity id like to see. im trying to be optimistic since I appreciate the rest of the story and the kingdom building aspect since its rare to see a decent one on WN fanfics.

Fito:well you're partly right, the mc still looks like a robot.
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