Dqrk

this novel is amazing, absolutely beautiful however the MC is a idiot that makes stupid deals and can't think properly he acts like a child even though he is 25 and supposedly has many years of experience in the gaming community however it is clear that he almost has no clue what he is doing as he gives away his advantages and benefits that help him grow without a second thought. i love the world building and where the story was going however after not killing his opponents in a TOURNAMENT and then signing a contract where he owns 4 people a favour with no limit except that he mustn't be killed or harmed just for a few beast cores and also gives up all of his remaining beast cores it is just so frustrating then he gives away his teachers mana circulation method without a second thought and just openly shows all of his cards and weakness i would expect this if the MC was supposed to young a clueless like the start of cultivation online but this guy is a 25 year old man that has apparently been gaming for over 10 years he should know the community and what is worth and what inst.

yea but those techniques are really powerful and didn't ask his teacher before sharing them it could of been family secret technique and just threw it out there to a person he barely knows the whole deal was incredible stupid and dumb i mean he already gave away all his soul cores then he still owns them a favour which could be anything basically like give me your gold i nees a sword and he wouldnt be able to decline because the only limits on the contract were that it must not cost him is life

it said in this chapter that he died in a gas leak

i really liked this novel however the translation quality at least up to the current free chapters is absolutely terrible. consistently using the wrong names and pronouns. Also the story gets pretty repetitive. overall a great novel to dumb down and read while relaxing don't over think anything and just enjoy! 02:12:2023-Dqrk29